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Chapter 0 - The Rain

I didn't write this when it was raining... weird huh? ?_?
Anyway, I love the rain, and thinking about it moved me to want to write about it! Enjoy! ^______^

Chapter 0 - The Rain

Chapter 0 - The Rain
I watch the rain wash away my pain.
Its beautiful.
It smells wonderful.
Its free of hurtfull desire.
To soothe is its aspire.
It sings, sometimes mournfully, and sometimes happily, but it never does so scornfully.
It purifies.
The rain is a gift, one to be cherished.
For without it, wouldn't life already have perished?
The rain is sweet, it helps my heart beat.
The rain gives life and food, man need never intrude.
Let the rain be, its a wonderful sight to see
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hakutheblindedsoul on October 31, 2008, 8:01:01 AM

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hakutheblindedsoulXD I really love the rain too! Your poem is so true! (oh, God, I rhymed. Make me stop.) But yes, really nice! I have the warm fuzzies from it! Keep up the good work!

theolive on September 26, 2008, 11:48:17 PM

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AdventChild13 on September 28, 2008, 11:52:35 PM

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AdventChild13oh thank you soooo much, u r really too sweet!!!!!!!!!
I think I'm going to add you onto my FAC family, look at it on my blog!!!!
thanks again soooo much!