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The Punishment

This is my version of what kind of punishment should Otouto get for being a dog on Ani. A Pandora Box twist

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Welcome to Heck.
Submitted: November 4, 2005 • Updated: November 4, 2005
Word count: 558 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 330

Chapter 2 - The Crystal Box
Submitted: November 4, 2005 • Updated: November 4, 2005
Word count: 740 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 314

Chapter 3 - The Window of Time
Submitted: November 5, 2005 • Updated: November 5, 2005
Word count: 1139 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 265

Chapter 4 - Brother Dearest
Submitted: November 20, 2005 • Updated: November 20, 2005
Word count: 948 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 274

Chapter 5 - The Punishment
Submitted: January 19, 2006 • Updated: January 19, 2006
Word count: 1084 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 303

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kproflostsouls on January 20, 2006, 10:40:02 AM

kproflostsouls on (Chapter: 5)
kproflostsoulsI agree with natalya...those two need each other...:walks over to the statue and places a flowr in front of it: They love each other.

Natalya on January 20, 2006, 3:36:57 AM

Natalya on (Chapter: 5)
NatalyaCan you write something a bit more upbeat please? I am getting depressed. Not that it isn't good...I just want something less capable of making me cry and scream.

Natalya on November 24, 2005, 8:21:27 PM

Natalya on (Chapter: 4)
NatalyaAnd I'm supposed to feel sorry for him why? *rolls eyes* He should have been less of a bastard...it's his own damn fault after all.

In any event, I love this story and can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Natalya on November 21, 2005, 1:06:00 AM

Natalya on (Chapter: 3)
Natalya*snickers* Oto deserves to be called worse than a dog! This is gentle compared to what I would do to him...though I may not say that as the story continues...oh well!

Ana on November 4, 2005, 10:23:12 AM

Ana on (Chapter: 2)
AnaWait till you see the f****** finale. Yes i start from the end.

Natalya on November 4, 2005, 10:15:42 AM

Natalya on (Chapter: 2)
NatalyaHmm...how interesting. Personally, I think he deserves this sort of punishment...well, maybe not THIS gentle. However, I think all is not how it seems and things are going to get worse for Oto. I hope that you continue this story, I really like it, Ana!