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You Never See The Most Obvious Things

Something has been irritating Zoro. What irritates him more is that he can't figure out what it is. And as if he's not having enough trouble, Luffy is just making things worse. (ZoroxLuffy)

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Beware A Bored Captain
Submitted: October 6, 2004 • Updated: October 6, 2004
Word count: 1991 • Size: 10k • Comments: 8 • views: 377

Chapter 2 - Still Irritated
Submitted: May 22, 2005 • Updated: May 22, 2005
Word count: 2175 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 329

Chapter 3 - Meat
Submitted: May 25, 2005 • Updated: May 25, 2005
Word count: 1279 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 290

Chapter 4 - Ask Dr.Chopper
Submitted: June 2, 2005 • Updated: June 2, 2005
Word count: 4016 • Size: 20k • Comments: 5 • views: 321

Chapter 5 - Sexual Frustration
Submitted: June 16, 2005 • Updated: June 16, 2005
Word count: 1470 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 312

Chapter 6 - Zoros Weakness
Submitted: June 21, 2005 • Updated: June 21, 2005
Word count: 1920 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 339

Chapter 7 - Dont Trust A Redhead
Submitted: June 21, 2005 • Updated: June 21, 2005
Word count: 2076 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 334

Chapter 8 - Competition and a Persuasive Reindeer
Submitted: July 26, 2005 • Updated: July 26, 2005
Word count: 1842 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 327

Chapter 9 - Damn Women and Their Games
Submitted: July 30, 2005 • Updated: July 30, 2005
Word count: 2556 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 273

Chapter 10 - Food Poisoning
Submitted: August 2, 2005 • Updated: August 2, 2005
Word count: 2344 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 344

Chapter 11 - Fear The Birdle
Submitted: August 3, 2005 • Updated: August 3, 2005
Word count: 2399 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 296

Chapter 12 - She Knows a Lot of Things
Submitted: August 9, 2005 • Updated: August 9, 2005
Word count: 1369 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 311

Chapter 13 - A Thief's Confession
Submitted: August 11, 2005 • Updated: August 11, 2005
Word count: 2879 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 296

Chapter 14 - Without Words
Submitted: August 13, 2005 • Updated: August 13, 2005
Word count: 3530 • Size: 18k • Comments: 5 • views: 352

Comments

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loppy_mad_rocker on December 21, 2006, 4:52:14 AM

loppy_mad_rocker on (Chapter: index)
loppy_mad_rockercould u pritty ples continue it
ples
its sooooooooooooooooo great

loppy_mad_rocker on July 2, 2006, 1:47:08 AM

loppy_mad_rocker on (Chapter: 11)
loppy_mad_rockerarrrr that turtle-bird thing
LETS HAVE SOME BURDLE STEW!!!
*sob* so close zolo

MandyLovsDaPeoples on June 6, 2006, 2:55:40 AM

MandyLovsDaPeoples on (Chapter: index)
MandyLovsDaPeoplesplease put more?

YaioAnime on May 26, 2006, 1:05:52 AM

YaioAnime on (Chapter: 13)
YaioAnimeLove this story and love Zolo and Luffy what more could anybody want

KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 10:19:08 AM

KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 14)
KichigaiNeko-Chan-falls back- FINALLY!
The anticapation was like TORTURE!
But youz did it!
And im SOOO glad!

~KNC
Im...so HAPPYY~~!! T____T

KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 9:26:24 AM

KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 11)
KichigaiNeko-Chan-falls out of her chair-
Damn...that, that...THING!
-twitches-
POR QUUUEEEEE?!?!!!!

~KNC
so close....SO close...
-twitch-

KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 8:04:15 AM

KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 3)
KichigaiNeko-Chan-snort- haha! i love this!
Its short but cute!

~KNC
-points randomly- Onwards! to the next Chapptah! -walks off towards the wrong direction-

KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 7:53:43 AM

KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 4)
KichigaiNeko-ChanWhheeeeeeeeee! Sexual fustration rawks! Its so fun!
For the readers i mean, but for poor Zoro it must be...frustrating!

~KNC
WOO!

YamiTenshi on December 11, 2005, 6:08:50 AM

YamiTenshi on (Chapter: 8)
YamiTenshiThis is the first time I've seen a kinda Luffy/Nami pairing. I've thought about writing one but I don't know what to write...

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:30:23 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 14)
ChibichanYES!!!! Oh man, it's about time this happened!!!

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:18:56 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 13)
ChibichanGAH!!!! HE WAS SO CLOSE!!!!
well, at least Nami's being a little nicer, right?

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:10:44 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 12)
ChibichanWOOT!! NOW HE SHALL NOT WORRY ABOUT THEIR FRIENDSHIP ENDING AND ALL THAT WHEN HE TELLS LUFFY!!
he WILL tell him, right?

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:06:48 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 11)
ChibichanDAMN THE BIRD-THING!!!!!
they were sooo close!!
To the next chapter!

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:55:07 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 10)
ChibichanAwww, that was a fun chapter. ^_^

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:37:36 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 8)
ChibichanNah, Chopper was great in this chapter. He's both the doctor and the matchmaker of the crew. ^^

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:22:48 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 6)
ChibichanHeh, I couldn't keep from laughing either during that last part. I_I

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:11:09 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 5)
ChibichanME WANTS THE CANDY!!!!!

Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:05:41 PM

Chibichan on (Chapter: 4)
ChibichanAwwww, Chopper was uber cute here! ^^

wolfgirl98 on November 5, 2005, 4:35:42 AM

wolfgirl98 on (Chapter: 3)
wolfgirl98awwwwwwwwwwwww that is soo cute

dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on October 6, 2005, 11:32:17 AM

dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on (Chapter: 5)
dms_cheeseshirted_chorusnekoCandy candy candy!-Begs- Yesh, this is sooo awesome, after a while of careful thinking, Luffy and Zolo would be cute together, but I still like the ZoloxSanji pairing-shruggs- Who knows, maybe it'll change

KrimtheCeruleanAzure on August 19, 2005, 12:26:47 AM

KrimtheCeruleanAzure on (Chapter: 13)
KrimtheCeruleanAzureHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Clense the world of all women. I have no idea why I find that funny. God this story is so cool!

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 17, 2005, 3:58:50 PM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 14)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyNya!!! Bunny wuvd it!!! You should do a short sequel with a lemon scene!!! Nya-ha!!

shamenteen on August 14, 2005, 1:10:22 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 14)
shamenteenYay!! *cheers*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:45:25 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 14)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlWHAAA!! KISSY KISSYY!! *squeal* And you are so welcome!! This story was so fricking awesome! Epilouge, or sequel pleeeease?????? *big chibi eyes*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:38:55 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 13)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlAwww, poor Zoro... BE STRONG MY GREEN-HAIRED BUDDY!!!!

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:34:40 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 12)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlRobin, you rawk. Keep the great story running! *pumps fist*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:34:34 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 12)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlRobin, you rawk. Keep the great story running! *pumps fist*

shamenteen on August 11, 2005, 5:06:04 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 13)
shamenteenMore! You must write more! I want to know what Zoro is planing on doing! Write, for the love of god and all that is un-holly, write more!!!

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 11, 2005, 10:11:23 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 13)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyAHHHHH!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ZOLO TO TELLLLLLLL!!!!!!

shamenteen on August 10, 2005, 3:05:11 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 12)
shamenteenGood to see you writting! It WAS painfully short! Oh well, makes a good teaser of what should happan right? Hope you update soon!!!

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:48:04 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 11)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlThat WAS a fluffy kitten! ^w^ That birdle will be haunting my dreams tonight though.... *shudder* I have the urge to draw teh birdle now.

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:39:50 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 10)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlOO!! Me!! Pick me!! I like kittems!! Awesome story! Kepp up the great work!!

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:34:10 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 9)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlDAMN YOU NAMI!!! I HATE YOU!!!! Go Zoro-nii-san!!!! Kick her @$$!! And oooo....kisses *makes grabbing motion for bag*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:29:42 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 8)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlAwww. Choppeh-kun..... you're so sweet! *huggles*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:26:41 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 7)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlNAMI YOU dog!! GIVE ZORO LUFFY!!! *fume* schmalt....I like that word....schmalt... ^w^

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 4, 2005, 1:36:09 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 11)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyNYAAAAAA!!! Zolo and Luffy!!! C'mon, KISS!!!!!!

shamenteen on August 3, 2005, 11:08:57 AM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 11)
shamenteenI have a craving for turtle soup and chicken pot pie right now....dam bird-thing. I'll kill it! Anyways, good chap and I hope your next update will be soon!!! (So close Zoro, but so far)

shamenteen on August 2, 2005, 5:22:36 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 10)
shamenteenThis was a really good chapter to the fic! Finally, some zoro and Luffy bonding! Sugestions? Hmmm, why don't you....put in a evil talking bunny that is a pirate who comes in in search of another guy who has a bounty o his head, and Zoro and Luffy get cought in the crossfire. Wait, make it a evil, talking, pink bunny, I hate pink. That would be really random and funny! ^.^ *favs* Anyway, hope you update soon!!!

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 1, 2005, 4:51:59 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 9)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyMooooore please!!! I loooooove Luffy/Zolo!!!!!!!!!

shamenteen on July 30, 2005, 8:57:49 AM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 9)
shamenteen*puppy dog eyes* Can you write more soon please? I really like the story. Go Zoro! Don't let the girl win!

shamenteen on July 27, 2005, 11:50:34 AM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 8)
shamenteenWrite more! I really like this story so I'm going to nag you once a week till you write more...well, atleast nag you once in a while. Hope you update soon! *favs*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on July 27, 2005, 7:25:02 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 6)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlStill an awesome story!! I love it! Ish so funny! ^^

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on July 12, 2005, 8:36:27 AM

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 7)
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupii have read it all at fanfiction

Angie-chan on June 22, 2005, 9:39:32 PM

Angie-chan on (Chapter: 6)
Angie-chanSorry! I don't know why, but none of the chapters are showing up. Or at least it's that way on my computer... I hope I don't have tp re-post. I tried replacing the chappies, but it doesn't seem to be working.

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on June 21, 2005, 10:32:43 PM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 1)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyYour last two chapters aren't showing up, can you re-submit them?!

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on June 17, 2005, 7:33:12 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 5)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlCANDY!!! WH00T!!! whaa!!! Hee hee...sqeaky knees...I wanna see the squeaky knees!! >.

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on June 16, 2005, 8:16:21 AM

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 5)
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi WOOT CADDAY (snaches the canday) here we go oooooooooowwwwwwwwww' this on says man loveuing whoot !!!! next chap please

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on June 7, 2005, 5:35:28 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 4)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlOH! OH! HE ADMITS IT!!! GO ZORO! oh, I'm working on a ZxL pic, just gotta finish coloring it!! ^^

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on June 2, 2005, 6:27:02 AM

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 4)
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupithats it WAH!!!!!!!

Kiku:NO!!

stefen:WOW!!!kiku i didn't know you actully cared about other things but me !!! espaclly sweet lovey yoai story(tears come down stefens cheaks) it is ...just so..... CUTE!!!!!

kiku: YAH well don't read to much into it ok ..it's...just..a..good..story thats all.(truns around and wipes a tear from his eye).

stefen: AWWW it is ok kiku,i am sure angie will add more to the story ,ok kiku my love!!!

kiku:ok .. i guess

stefen:HOW ABOUT A BLOW JOB TO MAKE IT BETTER

kiku:save your energy 4 tonight!!

stefen:OK!!

me:IT IS NOT FAIR!!! the story iss no more ,next chapter!!! PLEASE!!!

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on June 2, 2005, 2:27:38 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 4)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyNYAAAAAAAAAAA MORE MORE MORE!!! And check out my Z/L pics!!

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on May 26, 2005, 11:25:01 AM

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 3)
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupiawwwwww thAT is cote
(cute)!!!! write more

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on May 26, 2005, 5:58:17 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 3)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girlawwwww....Luffy-San's so sweet!! I kep meaning to do a ZoroxLuffy drawing.... I will eventually, and when I put it up, You'll know!

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on May 22, 2005, 8:07:57 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 1)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyI've always wanted to read a Z/L Yaoi or see a pic like that!!! THANX!!

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on May 22, 2005, 5:48:19 AM

the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 2)
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupihey whats with the cut off more were is the rest WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!

Anime_Crazy_K-chan on May 14, 2005, 5:27:58 AM

Anime_Crazy_K-chan on (Chapter: 1)
Anime_Crazy_K-chanThat was SO awesome! I'm lovin' it!

Jasmine: Zoro's cute x3

Um.. ok. Thanks Jasmine. Anyway, write more!!

“One day, I’m going to stab that woman…” He thought angrily. “Stab her in the face.”

He smiled to himself as he thought about stabbing Nami in the face… repeatedly.

IceQueen29 on March 25, 2005, 1:20:45 PM

IceQueen29 on (Chapter: 1)
IceQueen29Please keep writing. Its very good so far.

_sephiroth on October 19, 2004, 12:43:01 AM

_sephiroth on (Chapter: 1)
_sephirothI want mooorreee.. it's just soo good.. I already love it ^^ +favs

MizDoom on October 10, 2004, 8:56:40 AM

MizDoom on (Chapter: 1)
MizDoomweres the sex!! u suck, i mean u suck HARD!!! LOL but the story was cute..i likey!!....but it would be better with some loving!! huh!!

DragonicFlames on October 7, 2004, 6:39:56 AM

DragonicFlames on (Chapter: 1)
DragonicFlamesO.o; ZoroxLuffy????? well now I didn't see that coming. x-x;

StrikeClaw on October 6, 2004, 8:27:34 PM

StrikeClaw on (Chapter: 1)
StrikeClaw........more?

..More? ?_?

More to read pleasc?

Its very good.

I want to know what happens next.