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Mifuyu's Magical Multiplying Mole

A short story I wrote for extra credit in chemistry. Mifuyu of the Supernatural Research Association gets a mole which isn't quite what it seems.

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Chapter 1 - Mifuyu's Magical Multiplying Mole
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: January 30, 2006
Word count: 7520 • Size: 43k • Comments: 2 • views: 402

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theWriter on August 20, 2006, 8:32:11 AM

theWriter on (Chapter: 1)
theWriterIan...This was absolutely adorable. I can't express it...All the time I was reading this I was smiling. And though moles are rather...homely...you pulled off the "awwww" factor quite well. My only complain it at the end with the "CanIcanIcanI"....Though I do understand where you're coming from, it looks a little bit odd on paper. And the "cuut~te". The hyphen thingy probably works the best.

Otherwise?

Great. A original and fun read.

This is the first going on my favorite list in a helluva long time. :D

omiyage_umi on June 20, 2006, 7:35:18 PM

omiyage_umi on (Chapter: 1)
omiyage_umiWow... now i have finally read the story that you explained to me at least five times... but now i forgot what does it have to do with science again >_< i get the feeling there's a pun in the word mole but i might be wrong also i think i need your phone number cuz i already miss you and sarah and it's sad that you're moving at least i can keep in touch through fan art central...recently i've noticed that the friends i make unique bonds with in a short time leave... also what happened to your other stories i still can't find mine i'm rambling again i haven't posted or commented in a while is prob'ly why I should really get some sleep i have summer school to go to and i'm sick AGAIN yeah sleeps sounds nice OH AND I ALSO SAW ALL 26 EPS. OF EXCELL SAGA SHE DOES TALK FAST I DON'T MIND HYATT BUT MY SISTER DOES we both cried when LORD IL PALAZZO shoots Excell in the near end eps. but then i cried tears that were a mixture of get over it it's an anime and joy when they both fell down the trap door BUT THE VERY LAST EPISODE SCARED ME I WAS SHOCKED AFTERALL... GEEZ anywho i should go to bed BUT FIRST watermelon i need to eat watermelon...-_- no really i do i'll go raid my fridge......................................
THE EVILNESS THAT IS A FOODLE HA YOU THOUGHT IT WAS OVER THE CARD GAMES THE CARD GAMES THAT IS WHERE THE FOODLE LURKS ^_0 ^-^ ......CHUDLES