Chapter 1 - ponderings on the rings
Submitted August 18, 2008 Updated October 31, 2008 Status Incomplete | just something I wrote one low day in love .. we all have those days where we wonder ... "will anything lasting become of us or will we go our separate ways .. just leaving our rings in the sand?"
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Chapter 1 - ponderings on the rings
Chapter 1 - ponderings on the rings
I stand there wondering what their story was, how it led them here,
And would one day I be standing there too, leaving a ring of my own in the sand,
Would I send a "I love you" floating on the wind, or would I silence it with a kiss,
And as I stand there wondering I watch as the tide slowly comes in washing the rings away,
I stand there till the rain stops and the still sea retreats again and walking back to the spot their rings had lain I set this all down in rocks stone and seaweed "here two lovers parted, two rings washed out to sea, to days gone bye and to days yet to be, will this be mine own end or some other fate unknown, I still will proceed for the prize is the getting there not the destination."
And I walked away still wondering, but not worrying, if I would be back again someday walking hand in hand with another in a light rain all our own.
And would one day I be standing there too, leaving a ring of my own in the sand,
Would I send a "I love you" floating on the wind, or would I silence it with a kiss,
And as I stand there wondering I watch as the tide slowly comes in washing the rings away,
I stand there till the rain stops and the still sea retreats again and walking back to the spot their rings had lain I set this all down in rocks stone and seaweed "here two lovers parted, two rings washed out to sea, to days gone bye and to days yet to be, will this be mine own end or some other fate unknown, I still will proceed for the prize is the getting there not the destination."
And I walked away still wondering, but not worrying, if I would be back again someday walking hand in hand with another in a light rain all our own.
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PhantomDoll13 on October 30, 2008, 11:59:59 PM
I DIDN'T KNOW U WROTE THINGS LIKE THIS....IT'S SO BEAUTIFULAtomicMoat on October 31, 2008, 12:12:59 AM
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hehe was slightly depressed/emotionally confused at teh time ..PhantomDoll13 on October 31, 2008, 1:01:45 AM
we all have moments like thatAtomicMoat on October 31, 2008, 1:04:37 AM
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yep .. and I just get all "deep" and creative and stuff in them XDPhantomDoll13 on October 31, 2008, 1:17:12 AM
i like itsilvercat on August 20, 2008, 12:43:11 PM
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Wow, this is really deep, and it does leave you thinking in the end...keep going!