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Chapter 1 - Death to a Friend

my friend valerie wanted me to write a poem about killing her in her sleep so here it is!

Chapter 1 - Death to a Friend

Chapter 1 - Death to a Friend
~As i stand i watch u sleep
-Thinking that the pain is deep.
~U lay still in ur bed,
-evil thoughts run though my head.
~I cant stand the sight of u,
-Making that face u always do.
~I cant bare to do it,
-but i must go through w/ it.
~Everything that i fear,
-Has now become o so clear.
~Ur smile, ur touch, ur scent,
-Have all gone and went.
~U sleep so soundless,
-Now ive become doubtless.
~"I MUST!" i say,
-cuz then the pain will go away.
~I pull the knife up and found,
-That u made no sound.
~I watch u lay and bleed,
-Is this really wut i need,
~To make the pain end?
-Cuz now ive caused a Death to a friend.......

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orangejelibean on July 19, 2004, 11:50:26 AM

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orangejelibeanawww baby that is the best poem ever I LOVE IT ur so talented....i love u and miss u alot......~b

Dark_Kit on July 5, 2004, 1:09:55 PM

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Dark_Kithow could no one comment? O.o interesting poem but I like it