Chapter 1 - AGIRL
Submitted March 9, 2005 Updated March 9, 2005 Status Incomplete | a poem COMMENT PLEASE
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Chapter 1 - AGIRL
Chapter 1 - AGIRL
A GIRL
There's a girl with many dreams
She was hurt and she felt lost
She's so confused and her life
feels used
She knows one more mistake
her life will be more messed up
So messed up she'd be torn apart
left with nothing but an
empty heart
There's a girl with many dreams
She was hurt and she felt lost
She's so confused and her life
feels used
She knows one more mistake
her life will be more messed up
So messed up she'd be torn apart
left with nothing but an
empty heart
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Lanfear on March 22, 2005, 5:48:33 PM
Lanfear on
there are really strong feelins in this poem, beautifully written. u no one of my poems is also entitled girl, if you have time u could check out my writing ;) . l8er LanfearBabyDemound12 on March 11, 2005, 4:09:46 AM
IT'S ABOUT MY FRIEND SHE WAS TALKING TO ME ON THE PHONE SO I BASED IT ON WHAT SHE SAIDroxy on March 10, 2005, 6:13:57 AM
roxy on
this is really good. who is it about