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Chapter 2 - Seize the Dei(dara)

I know there's probably about a million stories like this on the internet, but...
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Chapter 2 - Seize the Dei(dara)

Chapter 2 - Seize the Dei(dara)
Deidara slowly opened his big, blue eyes as he awoke to a loud ringing noise. "Un...?" He rubbed his eyes and sat up in his bed. "Un..."
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"Un!!!" Deidara said loudly as he sat down next to Konan.
"What are you so happy about?" She asked.
Deidara smiled. "Eh, just got over my artist's block is all, un. I though it would never end, un. You wanna see?"
Konan shrugged. "Sure."
Deidara pulled a sketchbook out of his bag, and flipped to a dog-eared page. "See how I drew a bird on this page? It's totally misshapen, and it's eyes are to complicated, too detailed, un." He turned the page. "But here, it's head and body are just the right size, and the lines aren't so crooked, un. And the eyes are so simple, just little circles, un. Giving it that cute, stupid kinda look."
"Huh...."
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Deidara sat down in the back of the classroom, taking out his sketchbook once again.
I'll draw something real fine, un!!! It will be fantastic, un!!! Cool, modern, un!!! It'll just pop! out at you!!!! Un, yeah!!!

He took out a ballpoint pen and drew himself, in solid, crisp lines. Un!!! Now, to color myself in, un!!!
After coloring in the black parts of his drawing, the unexpected took place, un. Splat!!! The ink shot out, making messing blots on his paper. Un?! Un!!! I know, un!!!! He patiently waited a good 15 minutes or so for the ink to dry, then pulled a light blue pen out of his pocket. Un, this'll be unbelievable!!! He thought, drawing lines mimicing those of the ink blots, but slightly bigger. Needs more, un... He drew wide, expanding lines extending from the blue blots, yet, they were not connected. Un... More white, un... Definately more white!!! He took out a bottle of liquid white-out from his bag, then carefully wrote "BANG" on the black blots. Hm... Not quite done, un... Deidara colored in his eye and the cloud on his cloak. Perfect!!! Un!!!


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"Tobi, check this out, un!!! Look!!!" Deidara ran down the hallway.
"Sempai?"
"Look at this masterpiece, look at it, un!!! My new style!!!!!! Un!!!!"
Tobi gasped. "Oh, it's awesome, Deidara-sempai!!! It's, um... Pop-art!!! That's what it is!!!"
"Pfft!!! Pop-art?! My style is super-flat!!! Un!!!"
"Um, yeah!!! Super-flat!!!"
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Deidara sighed as he walked up the stairs to his room. "Well, today was pretty good, un..."
He took out his sketchbook and pulled the picture he drew earlier out, then picked up a tack off of his desk. My little masterpiece, un!!! I shall call you... "Seize the Dei(dara)!!"
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Author's note: I'm sorry the individual characters chapters are kinda short, I'm a very busy person and I don't have a lot of imagination. If you have an idea for my story or some tips to help with my writing skills, please tell me; I would really appreciate it. And I'd like to thank you all for your support, with your comments and favoriting this story. Love ya!!! ^_^

ATTENTION!!!!!!! I'm having trouble deciding who should fight in the next chapter, so please make a vote!!!!!!

Sasori vs. Sakura Haruno
Hidan vs. Shikamaru Nara
Kakuzu vs. Naruto Uzumaki or Kakashi Hatake
Itachi Uchiha vs. Sasuke Uchiha
Kisame vs. Suigetsu

One vote per person, please!!!! Also, if you are voting for [Kakuzu vs. Naruto Uzumaki or Kakashi Hatake], please say if you would like Kakuzu to fight Naruto or Kakashi in your vote.

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Lanayru on October 8, 2007, 7:30:04 AM

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LanayruWOOT! Go Deidara and your wonderful art that is like mine! *bows* I is your idol!!

Okay, worship deidara moment over. You finally decided to write morez! YAYZ! *runs around all happy like*
And I agree with rainbow fox, FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!

BadgerofPancakes on October 8, 2007, 2:17:19 PM

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BadgerofPancakesEh, I didn't draw the picture, I found that on PhotoBucket.... >_< But thanks, and a fight will be certain!!! ^^

Lanayru on October 8, 2007, 8:14:23 PM

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LanayruI ment Deidara's art. but your art is good too!^^
YAY FIGHT!

haoasakura7 on October 8, 2007, 1:22:39 AM

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rainbowfox16 on October 7, 2007, 11:46:31 PM

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rainbowfox16EEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKK!! NEW CHAPPIE!! YAY!! Loves it loves it loves it!!!Pretty pic, pretty pic!! *thinks for a moment* How about, a fight! Gotta loves the school fights!

KidRaccoon on October 8, 2007, 4:35:01 AM

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KidRaccoonExpect a fight or two soon. I'll definately put some in, and thanks!!! ^^

rainbowfox16 on October 8, 2007, 6:15:04 AM

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rainbowfox16Woot! FIGHTFIGHTFIGHT!!! *squee!!*