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Chapter 1 - A cold day

A poem

Chapter 1 - A cold day

Chapter 1 - A cold day
A cold day
in the middle of December
the memories I hold
are hard to remember

The snow falling
hitting the ground
slowing falling
not making a sound

Walking through the snow
my hands in my pocket
head hanging low
looking at my locket

I stop
I take a look inside
it's a picture
of the one that left me behind

I fall to the ground
stare up and cry
lying on my back
at the gray snow filled sky

I throw the locket
as far as it would go
and it falls
landing in the snow

The memories are back now
everything I ever knew
it's so plain to see
the memories are of you.




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weird_klown on September 15, 2004, 8:48:18 AM

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weird_klown....awesome...great job! you should be maga-proud!

blackrose208 on July 16, 2004, 11:53:16 AM

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blackrose208that is one of the best poems i have ever heard ** adds to faves

moon_child2000 on June 26, 2004, 4:46:40 PM

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moon_child2000This is a deep and yet not deep poem. Interesting....

BlackWolf on June 26, 2004, 12:57:35 PM

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BlackWolfwow. yea, i do wonder where all the comments are at. that is very beautiful, and the rhyming was great. ^^ you're a really good poet. ^^- *favs*

Revenge on May 11, 2004, 10:23:06 AM

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RevengeWhy wont ppl comment >< I like this poem!!!!! Whats wrong with you ppl *adds to favs*