Chapter 1 - disires lead to death
Submitted October 17, 2007 Updated October 17, 2007 Status Complete | ok So my friend J.T-kun came up with the ending for this and I did the rest!
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Chapter 1 - disires lead to death
Chapter 1 - disires lead to death
Desires lead to death
So I lie hear waiting,
wanting your warmth,
needing your touch,
feelings to deep to express.
could you ever understand?
the pain you left behind?
the hurt you caused to a broken heart?
do you even know?
Should i just end this now?
no more tears fallen
no more blood drawn
no more wants or needs
Im so confused
what should i do?
i can't go on
don't wanna live on
And now the lifeless body
Lies frozen on the floor
And all the wants
And all the needs
Are wanted and needed no more
So I lie hear waiting,
wanting your warmth,
needing your touch,
feelings to deep to express.
could you ever understand?
the pain you left behind?
the hurt you caused to a broken heart?
do you even know?
Should i just end this now?
no more tears fallen
no more blood drawn
no more wants or needs
Im so confused
what should i do?
i can't go on
don't wanna live on
And now the lifeless body
Lies frozen on the floor
And all the wants
And all the needs
Are wanted and needed no more
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sexxygirl93 on October 17, 2007, 11:59:52 AM
sexxygirl93 on
wow so good,, so much beter than minebookworm369 on October 17, 2007, 11:43:23 AM
bookworm369 on
i like it^^ i think ill also try and write the beginning for funnzies