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Chapter 0 - Understand

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This is a small poem I wrote for something that occured, please give me your comments on it and let me know what you think about it :)

Chapter 0 - Understand

Chapter 0 - Understand
Eager to say the forbidden words 3 words to cry out hoping you will understand the frustration, the self-hatred the endless conflict, with myself. Wishing it never happened hoping it will go away understanding that it wont... The consequences I understand the stupidity in my mind making me say the forbidden I... love... you...
Killing my mind the moment I cried out The feelings taking over
Hoping youd understand&

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Blizard66 on March 29, 2007, 2:11:20 AM

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Blizard66Eager to say the forbidden words
3 words to cry out
hoping you will understand
the frustration, the self-hatred
the endless conflict, with myself.
Wishing it never happened
hoping it will go away
understanding that it won’t...
The consequences I understand
the stupidity in my mind
making me say the forbidden

I... love... you...

Killing my mind the moment I cried out
The feelings taking over
Hoping you’d understand…

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p.s im doing this in a comment cuz it sucks to read a poem in the way that you see above :P