Chapter 1 - Give Up
Submitted August 10, 2005 Updated August 10, 2005 Status Incomplete | A poem that i wrote because i was feeling angsty...
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Chapter 1 - Give Up
Chapter 1 - Give Up
Give Up
I liked you
I thought you liked me back
I guess I was wrong
My heart can't give up
I tried going on
I hid my sadness
You knew I couldn't
My soul gave up
You went on with life
You thought I did too
I guess we were both wrong
You had given up
Give up
I can't, on what I think should be
My heart and soul won't give up
My spirit had given up when I met you
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Gothgirl13 on September 10, 2005, 7:38:10 AM
Gothgirl13 on
IT IS AN ASOME POEM!!!!!!!!!!^^BlackFireDemon01 on September 6, 2005, 4:38:18 AM
O.O this poem is just like the problemi am having with this one boy *sigh* Great Poem!Gothgirl13 on August 21, 2005, 12:31:13 PM
Gothgirl13 on
Oo wow thats so KOOL!!!it dark..i like dark^^
i cant right much cuse i cant spell and if i could it would go something like this
roses r green pickiels r blue chickens say MOO and i have shoes^^
ur poem absalutely ROCKS!!!
ShadowsDemonGurl666 on August 11, 2005, 4:19:33 AM
YAY!!! go bloddyhell!!! i love the poem. its very very good^^ youve always been good at writing dark poety. its in you ^^*faves*