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Zwolfs haunting

What Zwolf remembers from his expierences from the war :/

Came to me when we were watching a another movie on World War 1

So disturbing but it interests me on how cruel and stupid mankind is.

Sorry for any typos.

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Chapter 1 - War is such a bore
Submitted: March 26, 2004 • Updated: March 26, 2004
Word count: 280 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 188

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CheshireGoddess on May 30, 2004, 2:33:35 AM

CheshireGoddess on (Chapter: 1)
CheshireGoddesslol good guess but no the last two lines mean, good bye, then you have me, i was trying to make it sound like the war had him but i dunno. thanks for the comments on my poems natalia lol really appreciate them!

Escapee_From_Bedlam on May 29, 2004, 11:30:48 PM

Escapee_From_Bedlam on (Chapter: 1)
Escapee_From_BedlamIt seems that no matter the time, there is always going to be some sort of war going on, and I find the part where he wishes for the bullets to kill him quite depressing. Not in a bad way! But depressing in the good way ^_^" (How being depressed is good, I dunno o.o) The two lines in German are catchy! (Tries to say the German, but she doesn't have an accent so it comes out all wrong) When it's translated, is it like repeated the other two lines above it, or is it something different? (continues rambling about how bad yet good war is, and continues to speak bad German)

ratbrat on March 29, 2004, 8:36:14 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 1)
ratbratpoor zwolfy pooo....*hugles zwolf* great ches ure too good*hugs