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Chapter 5 - A counter part of Metal.....

When Amy runs away for good, Sonic is desperate to find her. He searches high and low, in hopes of finding her and finally telling her how he feels. Will he ever find Amy? Or more importanly, will Amy ever forgive him for what he's done?

Chapter 5 - A counter part of Metal.....

Chapter 5 - A counter part of Metal.....
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Alright,so anyone have any guesseson WHO Mange really is? Or what?
 
 
 
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Amy's smiling, looking out the windowof her hotel room. Mange hadleft around 2hours ago. She
had immediatelytaken off thepumps, letting the sorenessease out ofher feet. Shelaid back onthe bed, thinking
aboutMange.
 
Amy: *thinking* He's sucha sweet guy,but I don't think Ican handle arelationship yet. I thinkhe'll understand though.
 
Amy getsup as she hears someoneknocking at thedoor.
 
Amy: Mange, is thatyou? It's almost midnight!!
 
Amy opensthe door, revealing Sonicin the hallway. She stops, stunned at the sightof him.
 
Sonic: So, how have you beenAmy?
 
Amy,staring at him, can't even thinkof an answer as shebacks away fromthe door. Soniclooks at her.
 
Sonic: Um, could I comein?
 
Amy slowlynods her headas he steps inside.Emotions are flying through Amy'shead as helooks around.
 
Sonic:You got yourears pieced too? Whathappened to thatred dress youused to wear? (eyes the green pumps)
 
Amy: (coldly) I've gottenrid of it....I can't havesomething around, fullof painful memories.
 
Sonic stops,and looks upat her. Amy staresback, intently.
 
Sonic: Ithought you comeback home aftera while......
 
Amy: Why? You thought I'd comecrawling back, didn't you?
 
Sonic: Amy, that's notwhat I --
 
Amy: Ihave everything Ineed , right here, Sonic. I'm perfectly happy righthere. (stops) Do you wantsomething do drink?
 
Sonic: Everyone misses you, back home.
 
Amy: I'm sorry to hearthat. (takes out asoda)
 
Sonic:....I miss you......
 
Amy almostfumbles the soda, asshe puts iton the table. She turns awayfrom him.
 
Amy: Sonic, I think it'stime you shouldleave....
 
Sonic: Isaw you andhim today.....in thepark.....
 
Amy: Yep, the perfect guy, really.
 
Amy lookedat his pained expression. She hadnever seen himlike this before.
 
Sonic: I'm sorry Amy...
 
Amy: (turns to him) Why areyou even here? Areyou just tryingto make thisworse?
 
Sonic: Inever wanted tohurt you.
 
Amy: Well Sonic, you did. And ifyou didn't wantto hurt me, you'djust leave mealone.
 
Sonic's fistsclench. Amy backs awayfrom him.
 
Sonic:(coldly) So that'sit. I don't geta second chance....
 
Amy: (tears up) I didn'twant it toend like this. Ijust couldn't holdon to a lost causeforever. The pain was
too real.
 
Sonic: Alost cause? Amy, can'tyou see whatI've been tryingto tell you?
 
Amy: You can't just walkback in mylife and--
 
Sonic: Ilove you Amy, andI'm sorry ittook me thislong to figureit out.....
 
Sonic getsup to go, as Amy watcheshim.
 
Amy: Iforgive you Sonic, forwhat you've done, butI can't forgetit.
 
Sonic: Ihope all goeswell with yourboyfriend. (walks out)
 
As thedoor shuts behindhim, Amy lays onher bed andcries into apillow.
 
 
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For thefirst time inSonic's life, he didn'tfeel like running. He walked, lost, the sadness overcoming him with every step.
Back home, it seemed was where he was going....
 
Sonic: *thinking* I screwed all this up,.....and all I did wasupset her more.....
 
Mange: So.....you're Sonic........
 
Sonic turnsaround, as aorange looking hedgehogsmiled back athim. There was somethingabout that smilethat sent shivers
downhis back.
 
Sonic: And you must beAmy's new BF,......Iwanted to wishyou two luck.....
 
Mange: It's a pity too, Iguess. Amy and youwould have beena great couple....
 
Sonic: Um, thanks.....(turns to walk away)
 
Mange: (snickers) Oh, well, shehad a good life......
 
Sonic turnsaround, shocked at whathe's hearing.
 
Sonic: What did you say?
 
Mange: I'll let her watchyou die firstand then I'llkill her.......(raises hands)...with my own bare hands....
 
Sonic: (temper rising) Is this somekind of joke, dipshoot?!
 
Mange laughs, asfive long clawsshoot out hisright hand. Sonicstares in horroras he watches them slideback underneath hisskin.
 
Mange: Hehehe, Why soshocked Sonic?
 
Sonic: (steps back) Metal?! But Idestroyed you--
 
Mange: No, I am not mycounter part, Metal Sonic.... But as for you, (pullsout a black, metal ball)
 
Mange throwsthe black balldown as agray gas fumesout of it. Sonic chokes,trying to breath as Mangelaughs in theback round.
 
Mange: Good night, Sonic the hedgehog.....
 
As thegas clears, Sonic is lying on theempty side walk. Mange walks over and picks him up, throwing him over his shoulder.
 
 
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Weeeeeeeeeeeeee!!Now does it make some sense? =D
 

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_ren_tao_fan_ on February 8, 2007, 4:11:08 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_not metal sonic again, geez i hate that guy

shadeythesweet on July 10, 2006, 6:33:50 AM

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shadeythesweetwhoa! didn't see that coming! who dare you do that mange! how evil and horrible!? hahahahaha.......ha, he said dipshoot...^_^ oh and this is amyfan2004 LOVE THE STORY!

DaWolff on July 9, 2006, 6:11:43 AM

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DaWolffwell... it makes sense... not. XD i don't get it...

well... at least sonic finally told her...

i can't wait to read the rest!

livliv229 on July 8, 2006, 5:44:38 AM

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livliv229I LOVE IT SO FAR!

sonadowluver93 on July 7, 2006, 6:28:28 AM

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sonadowluver93I'm going to KILL YOU!!!!! *Screeches at the top of my lungs*

I am seriously sceraming too... no joke.

When I get my hands on you AND mange! Ohh just wait!

*Stomps to the gun and neuclear weapons store*

(Can't wait for the next chappie! ^ ^)

Phantom42 on July 6, 2006, 2:51:09 AM

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Phantom42YAY!!

Blitz- no, that's bad

.......YAY!!!

blitz- (sigh)

mange is still perfect to me!!

PB_SEAN on July 5, 2006, 5:39:13 PM

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PB_SEANIt's not kool or cool. It's KEWL! But I do really like it.

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on July 5, 2006, 2:37:50 AM

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Link_the_hedgehog_magicianWOW!! This would probably be my faveorite chapters in this story, lots of emotion! I like it. It's kool!