Chapter 1 - My Feelings
Submitted September 6, 2005 Updated September 6, 2005 Status Incomplete | This is just how I feel sometimes.
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Chapter 1 - My Feelings
Chapter 1 - My Feelings
On the outside I am smiling.
Happy, joyful, hyper.
But on the inside I am crying.
Tears, sadness, anger.
The thing that happen.
Making me want to scream.
Making me want to hide.
Making me want to die.
My hand in a little fist.
I punch my pillow.
I can't hold in the tears much longer.
The anger.
Sadness.
I scream.
I hide.
I cry.
I want it to stop.
I want it to leave me alone.
It's ripping me apart.
Go away.
Go far away.
Never come back.
Again.
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Enigma_Girl on April 25, 2006, 4:01:25 AM
Enigma_Girl on
story of my life...great though ^^_Sanctuary_ on March 15, 2006, 1:45:49 AM
_Sanctuary_ on
It's great.( )( )
(^.^)
(''')(''')
SaNcTuArY
Zoi_catCadaver on February 5, 2006, 4:17:05 AM
This poem is real choppy but that's good. It fits with the angsty sad theme. Very good. How old are you, btw? You seem young and if you can write like this now, think how good you'll get when you're older. ^_^Cutelilteen on October 14, 2005, 1:43:27 PM
Cutelilteen on
Well, it's not that bad LOL!