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Chapter 11 - Request For My Bro

since i can't make pictures currently (even though i stink at drawing -_-') I will make a book of poems this will get to be a big book 0.0

Chapter 11 - Request For My Bro

Chapter 11 - Request For My Bro
Yeah I'm supposta write a poem about something in nature I asked him what he liked and he said "all the fluffy animals" so I'll see what I can do for him ^^ I may not even do animals :P this poem is supposta be in his words so shhhh and yes if you do want me to write a poem for you I'll do it....perhaps just ask me! ^^
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------WE LIKE ALL THE FLUFFY ANIMALS
A lion is the king of the jungle
A cat is a pet that you snuggle
A mighty wolf howls at the moon
As a puppy hopes it is adopted soon
Then a monkey hangs upon a tree
And the bobcat is really special to me
Animals seem to be so powerful
But people think that they will rule
They think they'll rule over wondrous beasts
Their horrible ways to them should cease
But it doesn't and it probally never will
Unless people are willing to pay the bill
To give the animals a right to speak
So they can choose the life they seek
But we put them in cages for humans to stare
This really shows how much they care
But the sarcasm you fail to see
Amd the animals are really cool to me
So stop hurtin all the fluffly animals
They should be treated well and I'm not just talking about mammals
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I never new how short 20 lines was dang! oh well hope my bros science teacher likes it ^^ he is in a higher grade :P so I can understand if his teacher doesn't like it I think I might write another poem but I'm a little lazy so maybe not

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ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 9:16:55 AM

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ShadowSquall6789yea dat is tru how do ya ryhme like dat?
o well great poem

DarkDusk on April 27, 2004, 11:47:22 AM

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DarkDuskyes we like all the fluffy animals Yeesh kianna you just rhme by like putting in a line and figuring what rhymes with that word and what sentence you can use with that word is it really that hard you silly girl.. the title was part of the "moon song" sooo yeah and fluffy animals are cute *pokes fluffy animals* XD YAY!

GCrocker949 on April 24, 2004, 12:53:52 PM

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GCrocker949YAY...fluffy animals r kool...and...how do u rhyme like that?!?!...i wanna rhyme like that

lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 24, 2004, 5:04:12 AM

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lil_wolfie_gone_badFLUFFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!