Chapter 4 - Him
Submitted May 6, 2005 Updated June 25, 2005 Status Incomplete | Ok.....I made this up one night while watching One Piece! It was when Luffy told the story about Captain Shank. I,for one, think Captain Shank is the hottest thing besides many other Anime guys! ^-^ Enjoy my story!
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Chapter 4 - Him
Chapter 4 - Him
Alright. Sorry for the wait but we're having Summer vacation. I don't care about my writing errors. so don't correct me. Also I have PMS and I know how to use it! So don't bug me too much. I've had a bad day and I started my pain in the butt period. so yea whatever. Enjoy.
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Chapter 4: Him
He walked in as casually as anyman would. His hair as orange as the sunset. His eyes as deep as the
ocean. His muscles sort of protruding out showing his strength. He had a scent of musk upon him and I couldn't help
myself of catching a whiff of his smell as he walked past. A great sence of humor and a stern beautiful voice. His accent
baffled me. I simply adored the sea shantys he sang with his fellow friends. 'He's everything I wanted in a man.' I
thought.
I sat and sighed as I admired his beauty. For hours I sat there staring at him like a love sickened drunk.
My friends started to worry when I let out my 100th sigh.
"Ariel! ARIEL!" Hope shouted to me. I ingnored her calls.
"She can't hear you." Yo said
"Who's she staring at?"
"I don't know."
"I think it's that guy." Jeremiah said pointing to my dream guy.
"I need to know his name......" I said sighing one final sigh.
"I'll ask him!" Maddy quirked. She hopped out of her chair and happily trotted toward him.
Knowing her, she'd try to impress him and make me look like a total fool. "NO!" I screeched and chased after
her.
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This is where I'm ending today. Well what's gonna happen? You take a guess. Well......I got a couple poems and requests to finish....*bangs head against keybord* adkah jkha akdj aksdjg GEEZE! I HATE MY PERIOD! *Wacks head against computer desk* GAAAAHHHHH! *runs off to collect bishies*
I need at least 3 comments to keep writing.
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Chapter 4: Him
He walked in as casually as anyman would. His hair as orange as the sunset. His eyes as deep as the
ocean. His muscles sort of protruding out showing his strength. He had a scent of musk upon him and I couldn't help
myself of catching a whiff of his smell as he walked past. A great sence of humor and a stern beautiful voice. His accent
baffled me. I simply adored the sea shantys he sang with his fellow friends. 'He's everything I wanted in a man.' I
thought.
I sat and sighed as I admired his beauty. For hours I sat there staring at him like a love sickened drunk.
My friends started to worry when I let out my 100th sigh.
"Ariel! ARIEL!" Hope shouted to me. I ingnored her calls.
"She can't hear you." Yo said
"Who's she staring at?"
"I don't know."
"I think it's that guy." Jeremiah said pointing to my dream guy.
"I need to know his name......" I said sighing one final sigh.
"I'll ask him!" Maddy quirked. She hopped out of her chair and happily trotted toward him.
Knowing her, she'd try to impress him and make me look like a total fool. "NO!" I screeched and chased after
her.
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This is where I'm ending today. Well what's gonna happen? You take a guess. Well......I got a couple poems and requests to finish....*bangs head against keybord* adkah jkha akdj aksdjg GEEZE! I HATE MY PERIOD! *Wacks head against computer desk* GAAAAHHHHH! *runs off to collect bishies*
I need at least 3 comments to keep writing.
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Meesha is now Maddy.