Chapter 53 - “The Team Strikes Back!”
Submitted October 15, 2008 Updated October 24, 2009 Status Incomplete | This is the Story of Ryu Kozaku, a Boy who has A monster, Onaga the Dragon Emperor, inside of him.What is This Beast? And Why has it fallen to darkness? Read and Learn the Story that started it all...
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Chapter 53 - “The Team Strikes Back!”
Chapter 53 - “The Team Strikes Back!”
Narrator: As the monster swam forward, Axle stopped the boat and lunged at Kragor, giving him a Burning Konoha to the eye…
Kurai: Axle, what are you doing?!
Axle: Killing this abomination!
Kurai: That thing ate us! It might do it again!
Axle: Not if I beat it to a pulp!
Kurai: Oh, man…. I better help him…
Narrator: At that moment, she summoned snakes that could float on the water to keep the monster at bay, but the beast was too focused on the boat… it screamed into the night once more, and that’s when Sakura got up…and Sachi and Shizu as well… The jumped out of the boat and tackled the great serpent until it was worn out…
Axle: Now that it’s settled down…
Narrator: The monster wasn’t really after them at all, but was only hungry. It wasn’t fed in a while, and there was no fish…
Kurai: I have this Rice ball…
Narrator: It ate it like it was nothing. And then it didn't do anything at all. Instead, it picked them up and took them back to the beach…
TO BE CONTINUED
Kurai: Axle, what are you doing?!
Axle: Killing this abomination!
Kurai: That thing ate us! It might do it again!
Axle: Not if I beat it to a pulp!
Kurai: Oh, man…. I better help him…
Narrator: At that moment, she summoned snakes that could float on the water to keep the monster at bay, but the beast was too focused on the boat… it screamed into the night once more, and that’s when Sakura got up…and Sachi and Shizu as well… The jumped out of the boat and tackled the great serpent until it was worn out…
Axle: Now that it’s settled down…
Narrator: The monster wasn’t really after them at all, but was only hungry. It wasn’t fed in a while, and there was no fish…
Kurai: I have this Rice ball…
Narrator: It ate it like it was nothing. And then it didn't do anything at all. Instead, it picked them up and took them back to the beach…
TO BE CONTINUED
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Forestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:21:36 AM
lol,what andr28a said XD lol..who knew XDandr28a on December 17, 2008, 2:29:08 AM
andr28a on
A simple small rice ball sorted this whole problem LOL