A Wolf's Story
Submitted February 7, 2006 Updated September 24, 2006 Status Incomplete | The story of my original Balto wolf character Achak and how he grew up to be the wolf he is now. |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Intoduction to life
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 637 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 480
Chapter 2 - Destiny
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 2125 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 506
Chapter 3 - A Day To Remember
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 4548 • Size: 24k • Comments: 5 • views: 488
Chapter 4 - Change of Heart
Submitted: September 24, 2006 • Updated: September 24, 2006
Word count: 2348 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 524
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darkwolfluv55 on September 29, 2008, 12:13:53 PM
darkwolfluv55 on (Chapter: 2)
i love this story.^_^ it made me smile when Achak protected his siblings. X3darkwolfluv55 on September 29, 2008, 12:01:55 PM
darkwolfluv55 on (Chapter: 1)
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD so cute!SpiritRandomer on May 25, 2008, 7:39:15 AM
SpiritRandomer on (Chapter: 4)
LAWL IVE READ THE WHOLE THING WRITE MORE NOW IM HOOKED XDDragontine on September 9, 2007, 10:12:11 AM
Dragontine on (Chapter: index)
THE WORLD IS DECINTAGRATEING FROM THE SHEER AWSOMENESS (ohhh Im useing that coment more)Sukooru on November 18, 2006, 1:39:28 PM
Sukooru on (Chapter: index)
I decided to read the whole thing before I commented. Thats really amazing. I love the detail and POOR ACHAK! So sad but like everyone else said... it was really beautiful. The descriptions and everything... -Kuraudo-
SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 1:34:08 PM
SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 4)
well i officially hate... u u have me hooked on ur story now :D cant wait 2 here more -Cloudy
Dracoanimegurl on October 22, 2006, 1:53:30 AM
Dracoanimegurl on (Chapter: 4)
Lol Thanks? I'm currently making a sequel with a friend who's char was that red dog in the third chap.SilverLiningCloudy on October 22, 2006, 11:17:38 AM
SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: index)
lol dont worry i meen it in a good way <3 lol :Dim mlooking forward 2 it :D
-Cloudy
SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 1:12:08 PM
SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 3)
omg...omg...u horrible person...how could u make such a beautiful yet so friggn sad chapter ?!?!?... :'( T-T i am so reading the rest of it !-Cloudy
SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 12:14:57 PM
SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 2)
:O its amazing but... i found a spellin/grammer mistake! :O shame on u .. so jokes lol..3rd parograph...5th lione... instead of "wasn't SUPPOSE to be there" isnt it supossed to be "supposed" ?? or am i just loosing it -Cloudy
SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 12:15:32 PM
SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 2)
srry that was in chapter 2-Cloudy
sword_dragon on September 24, 2006, 10:34:12 PM
sword_dragon on (Chapter: 4)
XD YEY that was sooo great you write beautifully ^___^ hope there is another bit ^^VahnTheWhiteDragon on September 24, 2006, 9:40:03 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 4)
W00T!!!!!!!!!! awsome chap!!! this story is great! cant wait for the next one ^________^vTorch_Phoenix on August 28, 2006, 10:12:46 PM
Torch_Phoenix on (Chapter: index)
Aversome!Write more plz.
sword_dragon on August 21, 2006, 5:49:28 AM
sword_dragon on (Chapter: index)
great beautiful writin O.o i named my story b4 i saw your title on here!!! sooo weird great minds must fink alike my story is called a wolfs tale n achak means spirit and i have a character calls spirit o.O too weird =!!!!!! your story is great next chapter XDWeirdo on August 9, 2006, 9:32:21 PM
Weirdo on (Chapter: 3)
Oh my god. Beautiful, beautiful work. Amazing story. So sad. You caused me to cry, dangit. T_T *faves*barbara on August 4, 2006, 10:31:51 AM
barbara on (Chapter: 3)
awwwww! Poor Achak! *cries a river* that was so awesome and geez i cant decribe it! Great Job!VahnTheWhiteDragon on August 4, 2006, 10:16:22 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 3)
...poor achak..this chapter was beuatiful and sad at the same time TT.TT. this was a great chap keep up the great work!dragon_ally on August 4, 2006, 8:36:25 AM
dragon_ally on (Chapter: 3)
*sniff* I told myself that I wasn't going to tear up...ToT but I did. WAHHHH!
*blows on a tissue* That was very well set up; the events flowed really well together. AWESOME JOB!
goldmoon on June 13, 2006, 3:26:48 AM
goldmoon on (Chapter: index)
sooo cuteGoldenWolfGurl on June 7, 2006, 11:07:11 AM
GoldenWolfGurl on (Chapter: 2)
DragonxNekoxFire on April 30, 2006, 5:27:48 AM
DragonxNekoxFire on (Chapter: 2)
WOohoo!! THis is AWESOME!! Achak is sooo cool!!stuborn_pisces on April 23, 2006, 2:58:21 AM
stuborn_pisces on (Chapter: 1)
aww how cute! i love achick/kiona so muchWeirdo on April 14, 2006, 1:20:02 AM
Weirdo on (Chapter: 2)
Oooooo.... I can't wait next part! :omystic_girl on April 10, 2006, 10:43:18 PM
mystic_girl on (Chapter: 2)
WoW§!!!!!!!!! This is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT ^____________^Please tell me when you put up more story ! :)
*favs!* ^.^
dragon_ally on April 9, 2006, 1:06:48 AM
dragon_ally on (Chapter: 2)
WWEEEEE!!!! Brilliant! I’ve almost forgotten that I was sitting at my computer…lol…I was very into the story. Achak is a idol for all young wolves!
dragon_ally on April 9, 2006, 12:48:28 AM
dragon_ally on (Chapter: 1)
I've finally found the time to read your ultra wonderful story!!! Great characterization and imagery. I would comment more, but I gots to read the second chapter XD
CatWhoHas14Tails on February 7, 2006, 8:54:49 AM
CatWhoHas14Tails on (Chapter: 2)
YAY!! SO BRILLIENT! I loved it, Achak is so kind-hearted ^^VahnTheWhiteDragon on February 7, 2006, 4:56:29 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 2)
WOW!!! thats was so cool!! Achak being defensive and all. ^^v you really are good at these! i cantwait fer the next chapter \m/^^\m/ rock on!! VahnTheWhiteDragon on February 7, 2006, 3:09:25 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 1)
AWWW wolf puppys!! i hope you write more this is really good!! now i have to do mine. ^^V 100 outta 10