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A Wolf's Story

The story of my original Balto wolf character Achak and how he grew up to be the wolf he is now.



Chapter 1 - Intoduction to life
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 637 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 428

Chapter 2 - Destiny
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 2125 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 460

Chapter 3 - A Day To Remember
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 4548 • Size: 24k • Comments: 5 • views: 441

Chapter 4 - Change of Heart
Submitted: September 24, 2006 • Updated: September 24, 2006
Word count: 2348 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 474


Comments (30)

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darkwolfluv55 on September 29, 2008, 12:13:53 PM

darkwolfluv55 on (Chapter: 2)
darkwolfluv55i love this story.^_^ it made me smile when Achak protected his siblings. X3

darkwolfluv55 on September 29, 2008, 12:01:55 PM

darkwolfluv55 on (Chapter: 1)

SpiritRandomer on May 25, 2008, 7:39:15 AM

SpiritRandomer on (Chapter: 4)

Dragontine on September 9, 2007, 10:12:11 AM

Dragontine on (Chapter: index)
DragontineTHE WORLD IS DECINTAGRATEING FROM THE SHEER AWSOMENESS (ohhh Im useing that coment more)

Sukooru on November 18, 2006, 1:39:28 PM

Sukooru on (Chapter: index)
SukooruI decided to read the whole thing before I commented. Thats really amazing. I love the detail and POOR ACHAK! So sad but like everyone else said... it was really beautiful. The descriptions and everything...


SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 1:34:08 PM

SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 4)
SilverLiningCloudywell i officially hate... u u have me hooked on ur story now :D cant wait 2 here more

Dracoanimegurl on October 22, 2006, 1:53:30 AM

Dracoanimegurl on (Chapter: 4)
DracoanimegurlLol Thanks? I'm currently making a sequel with a friend who's char was that red dog in the third chap.

SilverLiningCloudy on October 22, 2006, 11:17:38 AM

SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: index)
SilverLiningCloudylol dont worry i meen it in a good way <3 lol :D
im mlooking forward 2 it :D

SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 1:12:08 PM

SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 3)
SilverLiningCloudyomg...omg...u horrible could u make such a beautiful yet so friggn sad chapter ?!?!?... :'( T-T i am so reading the rest of it !

SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 12:14:57 PM

SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 2)
SilverLiningCloudy:O its amazing but... i found a spellin/grammer mistake! :O shame on u .. so jokes lol..3rd parograph...5th lione... instead of "wasn't SUPPOSE to be there" isnt it supossed to be "supposed" ?? or am i just loosing it

SilverLiningCloudy on October 21, 2006, 12:15:32 PM

SilverLiningCloudy on (Chapter: 2)
SilverLiningCloudysrry that was in chapter 2

sword_dragon on September 24, 2006, 10:34:12 PM

sword_dragon on (Chapter: 4)
sword_dragonXD YEY that was sooo great you write beautifully ^___^ hope there is another bit ^^

VahnTheWhiteDragon on September 24, 2006, 9:40:03 AM

VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 4)
VahnTheWhiteDragonW00T!!!!!!!!!! awsome chap!!! this story is great! cant wait for the next one ^________^v

Torch_Phoenix on August 28, 2006, 10:12:46 PM

Torch_Phoenix on (Chapter: index)
Write more plz.

sword_dragon on August 21, 2006, 5:49:28 AM

sword_dragon on (Chapter: index)
sword_dragongreat beautiful writin O.o i named my story b4 i saw your title on here!!! sooo weird great minds must fink alike my story is called a wolfs tale n achak means spirit and i have a character calls spirit o.O too weird =!!!!!! your story is great next chapter XD

Weirdo on August 9, 2006, 9:32:21 PM

Weirdo on (Chapter: 3)
WeirdoOh my god. Beautiful, beautiful work. Amazing story. So sad. You caused me to cry, dangit. T_T *faves*

barbara on August 4, 2006, 10:31:51 AM

barbara on (Chapter: 3)
barbaraawwwww! Poor Achak! *cries a river* that was so awesome and geez i cant decribe it! Great Job!

VahnTheWhiteDragon on August 4, 2006, 10:16:22 AM

VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 3)
VahnTheWhiteDragon...poor achak..this chapter was beuatiful and sad at the same time TT.TT. this was a great chap keep up the great work!

dragon_ally on August 4, 2006, 8:36:25 AM

dragon_ally on (Chapter: 3)
I told myself that I wasn't going to tear up...ToT but I did. WAHHHH!

*blows on a tissue* That was very well set up; the events flowed really well together. AWESOME JOB!

goldmoon on June 13, 2006, 3:26:48 AM

goldmoon on (Chapter: index)
goldmoonsooo cute

GoldenWolfGurl on June 7, 2006, 11:07:11 AM

GoldenWolfGurl on (Chapter: 2)

DragonxNekoxFire on April 30, 2006, 5:27:48 AM

DragonxNekoxFire on (Chapter: 2)
DragonxNekoxFireWOohoo!! THis is AWESOME!! Achak is sooo cool!!

stuborn_pisces on April 23, 2006, 2:58:21 AM

stuborn_pisces on (Chapter: 1)
stuborn_piscesaww how cute! i love achick/kiona so much

Weirdo on April 14, 2006, 1:20:02 AM

Weirdo on (Chapter: 2)
WeirdoOooooo.... I can't wait next part! :o

mystic_girl on April 10, 2006, 10:43:18 PM

mystic_girl on (Chapter: 2)
mystic_girlWoW§!!!!!!!!! This is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT ^____________^

Please tell me when you put up more story ! :)

*favs!* ^.^

dragon_ally on April 9, 2006, 1:06:48 AM

dragon_ally on (Chapter: 2)
dragon_allyWWEEEEE!!!! Brilliant!
I’ve almost forgotten that I was sitting at my computer…lol…I was very into the story. Achak is a idol for all young wolves!

dragon_ally on April 9, 2006, 12:48:28 AM

dragon_ally on (Chapter: 1)
dragon_allyI've finally found the time to read your ultra wonderful story!!!
Great characterization and imagery. I would comment more, but I gots to read the second chapter XD

CatWhoHas14Tails on February 7, 2006, 8:54:49 AM

CatWhoHas14Tails on (Chapter: 2)
CatWhoHas14TailsYAY!! SO BRILLIENT! I loved it, Achak is so kind-hearted ^^

VahnTheWhiteDragon on February 7, 2006, 4:56:29 AM

VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 2)
VahnTheWhiteDragonWOW!!! thats was so cool!! Achak being defensive and all. ^^v you really are good at these! i cantwait fer the next chapter \m/^^\m/ rock on!!

VahnTheWhiteDragon on February 7, 2006, 3:09:25 AM

VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 1)
VahnTheWhiteDragonAWWW wolf puppys!! i hope you write more this is really good!! now i have to do mine. ^^V 100 outta 10