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Chapter 1 - shocked

this is like the jak 2 story's idi , but i deleted them , so here's the newer version , it's got darkdesire in (brittany)michelle(me),sooty(becci)
if anyone else wants to be in my story leave a comment on my profile telling me , u cud be a ottsel or

Chapter 1 - shocked

Chapter 1 - shocked


Jak 3 : haven city & wasteland adventures



It was a cold day in haven city, the freedom league were sitting resting in the headquaters, Sooty the ottsel was with michelle, Brittany was arguing with torn as usual, jak and ashlein were sitting down, dax and tess were cuddling, but as usual

The alarm went off , sooty got to her feet and said “ oh, great a attack at the port me and shell will go “ . so michelle and sooty left , when they got to the port it was silent

“some at's wrong “said michelle. Sooty was looking around anxiously , all sooty and michelle heard “ michelle,sooty move a rocket's coming “Michelle grabbed sooty and ran , jak got his peacemaker out and blew it up. ”phweeeeeeeeeew , that was a close one “ replied sooty . “who sent it ?! jak asked , “ how do I know “shouted michelle

,she was panicking and was really pale !.”michelle ,calm down” exclaimed jak .

“ oh god “shouted jak, there was a whole bunch of krimzon guard robots, sooty michelle and Brittany grabbed there guns and fired rapidly , it shot every single one , jak's mouth dropped a mile . “ hey, I do the shooting round ea “shuddered jak , looking slighty surprised .” sorry, we just got a little carried away”questioned Brittany

going bright red for some or no reason. They continued to walk back to the headquarters, Michelle kept looking back as though she was aspecting another attack.

Anyway , they reached the headquaters,and torn said “ahhhhh, Brittany u haven't lost ur jammy fighting style”. Brittany looked as though she was just about punch torn .

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night_elf_girl on October 6, 2006, 10:01:05 PM

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night_elf_girllol, fab

jakline on May 21, 2005, 9:18:04 PM

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jaklineEMILY-3 rolls now Lycan said yes.

jakline on May 20, 2005, 2:52:47 AM

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jaklineEMILY-YOH dylan. Seen as I'm gonna be in your story do you wan't to be in mine there are 4 roles at the moment Two that I'm already wanting people to say yes to are The Maruder spy (Dark_Lani) Jak's oldest sister (Deadly Lycan.) The roles open are Torn's sister and Jinx'es sister. Jaks eldest sister was in the KG so it has to be a KG related person.

jakline on April 25, 2005, 4:07:35 AM

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jaklineSomeone could get captured in ya next chapter and the good guys save him or her.and it ends up with errol getting badly hurt

DylanSanders959 on March 19, 2005, 8:25:41 PM

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DylanSanders959has any 1 got any really good ideas 4 this ?

darkdesire on February 7, 2005, 1:10:26 AM

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darkdesire Just about to punch Torn... Ah... Chur so good at this story writting... I adore ur talents ^^
Yesh... Torn must get bloody nose... he must... whether I do it er some one else ^^
*Evil laugh* Bvahahahahaha!!!!

JakDepidtor on February 2, 2005, 4:45:26 AM

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JakDepidtorCool! Write more PLEASE!

DylanSanders959 on February 2, 2005, 1:33:10 AM

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DylanSanders959well, as you know i used to write story's like jak 2 : haven city girlz , but i deleted it so this is a newer version so i hope darkdesire and sooty like this one better
anyone can be in my story, and can be any speies !....ottsel or what ever !