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Jak 3 : haven city & wasteland adventures

this is like the jak 2 story's idi , but i deleted them , so here's the newer version , it's got darkdesire in (brittany)michelle(me),sooty(becci)
if anyone else wants to be in my story leave a comment on my profile telling me , u cud be a ottsel or

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - shocked
Submitted: February 1, 2005 • Updated: February 1, 2005
Word count: 288 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 137

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night_elf_girl on October 6, 2006, 10:01:05 PM

night_elf_girl on (Chapter: 1)
night_elf_girllol, fab

jakline on May 21, 2005, 9:18:04 PM

jakline on (Chapter: 1)
jaklineEMILY-3 rolls now Lycan said yes.

jakline on May 20, 2005, 2:52:47 AM

jakline on (Chapter: 1)
jaklineEMILY-YOH dylan. Seen as I'm gonna be in your story do you wan't to be in mine there are 4 roles at the moment Two that I'm already wanting people to say yes to are The Maruder spy (Dark_Lani) Jak's oldest sister (Deadly Lycan.) The roles open are Torn's sister and Jinx'es sister. Jaks eldest sister was in the KG so it has to be a KG related person.

jakline on April 25, 2005, 4:07:35 AM

jakline on (Chapter: 1)
jaklineSomeone could get captured in ya next chapter and the good guys save him or her.and it ends up with errol getting badly hurt

DylanSanders959 on March 19, 2005, 8:25:41 PM

DylanSanders959 on (Chapter: 1)
DylanSanders959has any 1 got any really good ideas 4 this ?

darkdesire on February 7, 2005, 1:10:26 AM

darkdesire on (Chapter: 1)
darkdesire Just about to punch Torn... Ah... Chur so good at this story writting... I adore ur talents ^^
Yesh... Torn must get bloody nose... he must... whether I do it er some one else ^^
*Evil laugh* Bvahahahahaha!!!!

JakDepidtor on February 2, 2005, 4:45:26 AM

JakDepidtor on (Chapter: 1)
JakDepidtorCool! Write more PLEASE!

DylanSanders959 on February 2, 2005, 1:33:10 AM

DylanSanders959 on (Chapter: 1)
DylanSanders959well, as you know i used to write story's like jak 2 : haven city girlz , but i deleted it so this is a newer version so i hope darkdesire and sooty like this one better
anyone can be in my story, and can be any speies !....ottsel or what ever !