Chapter 1 - s.e.c.r.e.t
Submitted September 23, 2004 Updated September 23, 2004 Status Incomplete | It's a poem about a boy- and uhm.. well.. you'll find out when you read it
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Chapter 1 - s.e.c.r.e.t
Chapter 1 - s.e.c.r.e.t
He tells them his secret
What´s been troubling him for so long
He tells them his secret
Thinking that they love him
So that it won´t do much harm
He's built up his courage
As they held him protectively in their grip
While confessing he´s hoping
That they´ll say it´s okay
Yet it feels like they´re letting him slip
"Shut up,
Shut up,
Shut up"
He wishes he´d die
"Rotten flesh,
Disturbed mind"
He´s hurting
Punishing himself inside
Hands folded he begs
Not to be left alone
Eyes closed, heart acking
He prays
Shivering with jelly-bones
No matter what side he turns
No one is there to tell him it's allright
They've turned away
Having to hide hurted
But coming out stabbed him goodnight
::inspiration ended here- sigh.. lousy ending::
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You know- I made a story, but then my dad erased the files on the computer AND DAMN IT! NOW MY STORY IS GONE, AND I LIKED IT! DARN IT DARN IT DARN IT!
((is it noticable that I'm in a bad mood because of this? And it isn't the first time it happened either- last time, my dad erased ALL my poems... *grumble*))
What´s been troubling him for so long
He tells them his secret
Thinking that they love him
So that it won´t do much harm
He's built up his courage
As they held him protectively in their grip
While confessing he´s hoping
That they´ll say it´s okay
Yet it feels like they´re letting him slip
"Shut up,
Shut up,
Shut up"
He wishes he´d die
"Rotten flesh,
Disturbed mind"
He´s hurting
Punishing himself inside
Hands folded he begs
Not to be left alone
Eyes closed, heart acking
He prays
Shivering with jelly-bones
No matter what side he turns
No one is there to tell him it's allright
They've turned away
Having to hide hurted
But coming out stabbed him goodnight
::inspiration ended here- sigh.. lousy ending::
=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
You know- I made a story, but then my dad erased the files on the computer AND DAMN IT! NOW MY STORY IS GONE, AND I LIKED IT! DARN IT DARN IT DARN IT!
((is it noticable that I'm in a bad mood because of this? And it isn't the first time it happened either- last time, my dad erased ALL my poems... *grumble*))
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StephAlanPoe on August 2, 2006, 3:12:28 AM
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StephAlanPoe on July 18, 2006, 6:25:59 AM
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wasshissecret?is he secretly addicted to pegs? does he go around, pegging peoples nose holes together with those cheep plastic pegs you get from woolies? does he have a master plan to peg the headmaster of his skool's nose? then after that, the mayors nose? does he plan, that after he has taken over the skool AND the city, he will head for WORLD PEG DOMINATION and peg the president's nose? then, he plans to dominate NASA, nick a spaceship, and float around the whole universe pegging noses of martians, mormans, aliens, irkens, and gas station operators? well? DOES HE??????
no, i thaught not.
LexLuthorsVictimNJustAFriend on September 2, 2005, 8:21:29 AM
Ok, I know you said that it got deleted, but try this (BECAUSE NOTHING REALLY GETS DELETED FROM YOUR COMPUTER) Go to the start button and the go to search...when your there type in the name of your story and wait a minute or two it should pop up right away....if that doesn't work then your story is buried deep inside your computers system...oh and good poem... Meg_Moo on August 18, 2005, 2:38:24 PM
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I LOVE this poem! Its all sad and mysterious and back-stabby! ^_^deadontheinside on February 6, 2005, 3:39:38 PM
Awwwwwwwww... I really would have liked to of read it. red_wolf_hiaro on January 15, 2005, 1:15:50 PM
well thaT SUX!!ShadowOfDarkness on October 2, 2004, 2:16:10 AM
aaaw! that is just.... *grumble* .....Eggplant on September 26, 2004, 7:59:07 AM
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no- he restarted the entire computer so EVERYthing was deleted and gone forevahShadowOfDarkness on September 25, 2004, 11:05:22 PM
wooooo! i like!*light bulb appears above Shadow's head* cant ya check your recycal bin??? me hopes you will find it!
~ShadowOfDarkness~
"stabbed him goodnight"