Chapter 1 - Beach Day
Submitted January 13, 2005 Updated January 13, 2005 Status Incomplete | A...poem. You know you want to read it. :O
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Chapter 1 - Beach Day
Chapter 1 - Beach Day
It was a beautifulsummer day,
So all my fancharacters went to the Beach to play.
Emerald got therefirst and dragged poor Freak along
The disgruntledlennic mumbled, “I know this day’s going to go wrong.”
Bazooka was there topick up some chicks,
But all he got was apunch and a couple of kicks.
Tsunami grinned andsaid, “Pay up, you know I won that bet!”
The meerkat shook hishead and declared that they only had met.
And with that said hewent off after girls again.
Unfortunately, one ofthe girls had a boyfriend named Ben.
Kitzy sat on the sandand was very bored
Mainly because shewas being ignored.
Jewel finally askedher why she was not in the water.
She quicklyresponded, “This beach is a big bother.”
“You afraid of theocean, ay?” Bandanna said smirking.
Bon-Bon taunted,“Uh-oh, the sharks might be lurking!”
Kitzy simply satthere, taking in the mean jokes
Jewel jumped backinto the water, like she was not in on the hoax.
Orb built sandcastles, like a good little fox
Patches, her doll,even put in tiny rocks.
Suddenly, a kidaccidentally knocked the kingdom over
While chasing hiskite shaped like a clover.
“Shall I take care ofthe boy?” the faithful puppet asked.
Orb said no, her truefeelings masked.
Then all heads wereturned
As the sky turnedblack and the sea had churned.
And the silly greenkite had been struck by thunder.
“Um…oops. My bad,what a blunder,”
Orb said as sheteleported to some place unknown.
A mad scientist saidquietly “Damn, I should’ve made a clone.”
….And so the story ends.
Don’t you love howthe poem just blends?
I can’t believe thistook me an hour.
Boy, this story wassour.
So all my fancharacters went to the Beach to play.
Emerald got therefirst and dragged poor Freak along
The disgruntledlennic mumbled, “I know this day’s going to go wrong.”
Bazooka was there topick up some chicks,
But all he got was apunch and a couple of kicks.
Tsunami grinned andsaid, “Pay up, you know I won that bet!”
The meerkat shook hishead and declared that they only had met.
And with that said hewent off after girls again.
Unfortunately, one ofthe girls had a boyfriend named Ben.
Kitzy sat on the sandand was very bored
Mainly because shewas being ignored.
Jewel finally askedher why she was not in the water.
She quicklyresponded, “This beach is a big bother.”
“You afraid of theocean, ay?” Bandanna said smirking.
Bon-Bon taunted,“Uh-oh, the sharks might be lurking!”
Kitzy simply satthere, taking in the mean jokes
Jewel jumped backinto the water, like she was not in on the hoax.
Orb built sandcastles, like a good little fox
Patches, her doll,even put in tiny rocks.
Suddenly, a kidaccidentally knocked the kingdom over
While chasing hiskite shaped like a clover.
“Shall I take care ofthe boy?” the faithful puppet asked.
Orb said no, her truefeelings masked.
Then all heads wereturned
As the sky turnedblack and the sea had churned.
And the silly greenkite had been struck by thunder.
“Um…oops. My bad,what a blunder,”
Orb said as sheteleported to some place unknown.
A mad scientist saidquietly “Damn, I should’ve made a clone.”
….And so the story ends.
Don’t you love howthe poem just blends?
I can’t believe thistook me an hour.
Boy, this story wassour.
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paperclips_rock on July 12, 2005, 2:09:58 AM
well, at leat no one died or tried to commit suicide in THIS poem of yours. Changing gears, ay?
muchalucha on March 7, 2005, 1:04:31 AM
muchalucha on