Chapter 1 - Bunkbed
Submitted December 11, 2007 Updated March 2, 2008 Status Complete | yay here is a story i wrote one night when i was having a sleepover and some sort of KEKLIONS!!! arm hang down so i wrote this yay me!!! ^-^ oh and p.s im pretty sure most of you figured out that the ROAR!!! was probably somebody snoring
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Chapter 1 - Bunkbed
Chapter 1 - Bunkbed
BUNKBED
If you sleep on a bunkbed,
And you sleep on the bottom,
You sit there in the dark,
And you may see how some blankets drop down,
Those are tree branches and vines,
You see the bars above you,
Those are ripples in the river,
You are underwater,
You see the bedposts,
Those are trees rising out of the river,
You may also see the hand from somebody above hanging down,
That is a wild animal penetrating the river,
So as you sit there in the dark, underwater,
You may not be surprised to hear a ROAR!!!
If you sleep on a bunkbed,
And you sleep on the bottom,
You sit there in the dark,
And you may see how some blankets drop down,
Those are tree branches and vines,
You see the bars above you,
Those are ripples in the river,
You are underwater,
You see the bedposts,
Those are trees rising out of the river,
You may also see the hand from somebody above hanging down,
That is a wild animal penetrating the river,
So as you sit there in the dark, underwater,
You may not be surprised to hear a ROAR!!!
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Axel4eva on March 1, 2008, 4:04:16 PM
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Hinata102 on March 2, 2008, 12:46:12 AM
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thanx ^-^ its cool to meet somebody who actually see's what i saw on the bottom bunk ^-^BoReDdUdE on December 25, 2007, 4:46:36 AM
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i like your poems very uniqueHinata102 on December 25, 2007, 6:52:58 AM
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thanx ^-^Kyonkichis1Kitty on December 11, 2007, 2:26:12 PM
hand hanging down? Lol it reminds me of the time I had that arm problem with you lol. Anyway i like how you made this it is pretty unique take on a bedbunk. you know your a very good poet Hinata-chan.Hinata102 on December 11, 2007, 11:21:11 PM
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NEVER!!!!!!!! bedbunk? wtf lolKyonkichis1Kitty on December 12, 2007, 7:21:00 AM
lol wat?Hinata102 on December 12, 2007, 10:08:00 AM
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