Chapter 1 - Alone
Submitted July 26, 2004 Updated July 26, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is a poem i wrote after my first gf dumped me, so enjoy everyone and please make comments^^
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Chapter 1 - Alone
Chapter 1 - Alone
I am alone
All alone in my zone
As the sun rises
I never find what I prize
And thus I remain alone
Hardship, Mayhem, and desolation
In my sight there is no solution
For she stole my heart
My most vital part
So there is no happy resolution
I have seen what is to be
And what could have happened to me
She called me hun
We had a lot of fun
Our faces were full of glee
Again and again her lies added up
Those lies would fill a million cups
For I believed them all
And that was my fall
So now my emotions can never be up
Then I see her face
It’s a reliever for that mace
Then is goes and is replaced by sadness
Then that mixes with my madness
And this makes my case.
All alone in my zone
As the sun rises
I never find what I prize
And thus I remain alone
Hardship, Mayhem, and desolation
In my sight there is no solution
For she stole my heart
My most vital part
So there is no happy resolution
I have seen what is to be
And what could have happened to me
She called me hun
We had a lot of fun
Our faces were full of glee
Again and again her lies added up
Those lies would fill a million cups
For I believed them all
And that was my fall
So now my emotions can never be up
Then I see her face
It’s a reliever for that mace
Then is goes and is replaced by sadness
Then that mixes with my madness
And this makes my case.
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L7 on October 3, 2004, 8:47:27 AM
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this is a great poem. Horus on July 29, 2004, 6:49:54 AM
Horus on
Thanks jen this is the only poem anyone ever thinks is good thou lol^^Rayquaza on July 27, 2004, 3:51:48 PM
Rayquaza on
A sad poem ;-; you are great at poems Chris