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Chapter 1 - The Waiting Days

Sonic gets shot trying to save Amy. Sonic need surgery and he might not survive.

Chapter 1 - The Waiting Days

Chapter 1 - The Waiting Days
Sonic in the hospital


Note: I don't own Sonic, Knuckles, Tails, or Amy, But I own Trent and Silver ( I still can't figure out a name for him )


[ Sonic and Amy walking down the sidewalk ]
Amy: Let's go home.
Sonic: Yeah. I'm tired.
[ A Silver Hedgehog pulls Amy into a alley ]
Amy: Sonic!
Sonic: Hang on, Amy!
[ Amy stuck in a corner ]
Amy: AAH!
[ Silver aiming a pistol at Amy ]
Sonic: No!
[ Sonic runs in front of Amy, taking the shot ]
Silver: Ha-Ha!
[ Silver runs away ]
Amy: Sonic! Sonic!
[ Sonic chest was covered with blood ]
Amy: Somebody help!
[ Paramedics pick up Sonic and take him to the hospital ]

The Hospital

[ Knuckles, Tails, Trent, and Amy in the waiting room ]
Amy: [ Sobbing ]
Trent: Sonic did a good thing for you.
Amy: I know but,- [ Cries ]
Tails: I just hope he'll be okay.
[ Doctor come out ]
Knuckles: Is our friend going to be okay?
Doctor: [ Sigh ] The bullet went through his chest and it hit his heart.
Tails: Is there anything you can do?
Doctor: We're doing the best we can. He's going to need a new heart and do surgery. The chance of him surviving is 35%.
Amy: No! [ Starts to cry again ]
Doctor: You can see him for 1 hour and then you have to leave.
Trent: Thanks, Doctor.
Doctor: He's in room 6.

Room 6

[ Sonic barely breathing ]
[ Knuckles, Tails, Trent, and Amy walk in ]
Amy: Sonic!
[ Amy runs to Sonic ]
Sonic: Hi, Amy.
[ Amy kisses Sonic ]
Amy: Are you feeling okay?
Sonic: Yeah. For now.
Trent: You had us worried sick.
Sonic: I got surgery on Monday and I might not survive.
Knuckles: We'll be here for you.
Trent: Too bad we stay the night.
Sonic: I can only have 1 person to stay the night.
Tails: Let Amy stay with him.
Trent: Yeah.
Knuckles: We gotta go. We'll come back tomorrow.
Sonic: Bye, guys.
[ Knuckles, Trent, and Tails leave ]
Amy: Good night, Sonic. You need to rest.
Sonic: Yeah. [ Yawns ]
[ Amy hugs then kisses him ]
[ Sonic drifts to sleep ]
Amy: Oh, I hope Sonic'll be okay. I don't know what I'll be without you.
[ Amy gets her Sonic plushie and hugs it ]
Amy: Oh, Sonic. Please be okay.
[ Amy falls to sleep ]

Sunday

[ Sonic wakes up ]
Amy: Good Morning, Sonic. You sleep well?
Sonic: Uh-huh.
Amy: Oh, Sonic.
[ Amy hugs him tightly ]
Sonic: What's wrong?
Amy: This maybe our last couple of days together.
[ Tears run from her eyes ]
Sonic: I know. It'll be okay.
[ Wipe off her tears ]
Amy: I just hope you do well in surgery tomorrow.
[ Knock on door ]
Amy: I'll get it.
[ Amy answers and sees Shadow ]
Shadow: Hi, Amy.
Amy: Hi, Shadow.
Shadow: Hey, Sonic. I heard about what happened to you. You okay?
Sonic: I don't know. I got surgery tomorrow.
[ Trent walks in ]
Trent: Knock-Knock.
Sonic: Hey, Trent. Where's Tails and Knuckles?
Trent: They couldn't come. They said they were busy.
Sonic: Oh.
[ Doctor walks in ]
Doctor: Excuse me? I need to talk to Sonic alone.
Amy: Okay.
[ Amy, Shadow, and Trent walk out ]

5 minutes later

Trent: What's wrong, Amy?
Amy: I known Sonic all my life and if he dies, a part of my heart will always be empty.
Shadow: Don't worry. I bet Sonic'll be fine.
Amy: I hope so.

That night

[ Amy watching Sonic ]
Amy: [ Sigh ]
[ Sonic already asleep ]
Amy: Sonic. You're going through the operation tomorrow morning.
[ Amy holds his hand ]
Amy: I hope you'll be okay.

Monday

The Waiting Room

Knuckles: Today's Sonic's Operation
Tails: Yeah.
Trent: We're all here for him. Right?
Shadow: Right.

Room 6

Sonic: Well, this is it.
Amy: I know.
[ 2 Doctor walk in and push Sonic toward the Operating Room ]
[ Amy runs with them ]
Sonic: Amy, I need to tell you something before I go in.
Amy: What is it?
Sonic: I... I love you, Amy.
[ Sonic goes in the Operating Room ]
Amy: [ Whispering ] I love you too, Sonic.
[ Trent sees Amy ]
Trent: Come on, Amy. We can't stay here.
Amy: Sonic.....
[ Sonic getting his operation ]

1 hour later

[ A doctor walks out of the Operating Room ]
Amy: Will Sonic be okay?
Doctor: The operation was sucessful, but like I said: The chance of him surviving was low.
Amy: Oh, no.
Doctor: But he'll be able to pull through.
Amy: Oh, thanks goodness!
Doctor: Right now he's asleep. He should be up by this afternoon.
Trent: Thanks for saving our friend.
Amy: Let's go to his room right now!

To be contiued


































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sonicfan282 on February 25, 2007, 10:54:52 PM

sonicfan282 on
sonicfan282come on you have to write more. you didn't think of anything to add for two years? come on we're all dieing to see what happens!

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on July 11, 2009, 7:23:33 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4EverMake that four years!

LKK on April 25, 2006, 7:00:54 AM

LKK on
LKKAwwwwwwww that saw so sweet! Continue

lil_amy_rose on July 18, 2005, 10:24:26 AM

lil_amy_rose on
lil_amy_rosewow the story! i like it! it felt like i was actually there kool!

lil_amy_rose on July 18, 2005, 10:24:06 AM

lil_amy_rose on
lil_amy_rosewow the story! i like it! it felt like i was actually there kool!

Lynn_The_Fox on July 10, 2005, 9:50:20 AM

Lynn_The_Fox on
Lynn_The_Foxsniff.. if sonic dies then what are the shows gonna be called. SONIC MYST LIIIIVE! LONG LIVE SONIC! *that was the most wierdest thing i've said all day*

sonicfangirl on July 3, 2005, 6:39:35 AM

sonicfangirl on
sonicfangirlwhen r u going to write more... please hurry

Animegirl1994 on July 2, 2005, 7:13:37 AM

Animegirl1994 on
Animegirl1994What a sad story *sniffs* I wonder if Sonic's gonna live. Hope so. -_-,

Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_Rulez on May 8, 2005, 9:59:59 AM

Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_Rulez on
Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_RulezOMG..*WIPS TEARS*THAT WAS SO SAD....HURRY!!WRIGHT THE NEXT PART!!sonic loves amy...wow

Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_Rulez on May 8, 2005, 9:59:56 AM

Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_Rulez on
Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_RulezOMG..*WIPS TEARS*THAT WAS SO SAD....HURRY!!WRIGHT THE NEXT PART!!sonic loves amy...wow

Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_Rulez on May 8, 2005, 9:59:56 AM

Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_Rulez on
Hi_Hi_Puffy_Ami_Yumi_RulezOMG..*WIPS TEARS*THAT WAS SO SAD....HURRY!!WRIGHT THE NEXT PART!!sonic loves amy...wow