Chapter 1 - Apart
Submitted November 24, 2003 Updated November 24, 2003 Status Incomplete | its just a short poem that i did while i was bored.
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Chapter 1 - Apart
Chapter 1 - Apart
I will alwasy be with you
even if were apart...
I'll be by your side.
No matter where you are.
Are hearts are bind...
In the threds of fate.
No matter where time flows.
I will alwasy be with you...
even if were apart...
I'll be by your side.
No matter where you are.
Are hearts are bind...
In the threds of fate.
No matter where time flows.
I will alwasy be with you...
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tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 2:28:23 PM
tiler_james on
i like it. the first 4 lines remind me of the lyrics from the song "I will always be with you" from the movie All Dogs Go To Heaven 2. ^-^ikey on January 4, 2004, 10:37:17 PM
ikey on
i love it!!!i think its so pretty(don't worry im not putting my love life down again)*Saves To Faves*
kuramas_girl on December 25, 2003, 12:10:32 AM
kuramas_girl on
oooooo I really like this one!!! ~.~ It makes me feel like fate will send me a dark whole of no return......(I think I'm dolushonal?)kohaku_theblackwolf on November 27, 2003, 8:26:31 PM
Thats good!Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:05:44 AM
very good poem i liked it ;)