Chapter 1 - Waiting
Submitted April 12, 2007 Updated April 12, 2007 Status Incomplete | I'm trying to do poetry, leave me alone, except for constructive criticism.
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Chapter 1 - Waiting
Chapter 1 - Waiting
I am waiting in the dark
Singing a silent song
Watching as the night grows dark
And feel I am alone.
I wonder where you are
I hope to see you soon
But I wait all night,
You didn't come
And I want to go home
But I hide as I here someone coming
Dawn already here
I see you
But you aren't alone
I thought you held me dear
A tear
Some fear
And then I am alone.
I feel like I am in a mirror
The side that I see what you are doing
While you are oblivious to me
Oh if only you had known I was there
Maybe things would have been different
I throw the necklace you gave me at you
And run away
I hear you chasing me
Trying to catch me
But I run faster and you are gone
Again I am alone
Waiting on the other side of the mirror
Singing a silent song
Watching as the night grows dark
And feel I am alone.
I wonder where you are
I hope to see you soon
But I wait all night,
You didn't come
And I want to go home
But I hide as I here someone coming
Dawn already here
I see you
But you aren't alone
I thought you held me dear
A tear
Some fear
And then I am alone.
I feel like I am in a mirror
The side that I see what you are doing
While you are oblivious to me
Oh if only you had known I was there
Maybe things would have been different
I throw the necklace you gave me at you
And run away
I hear you chasing me
Trying to catch me
But I run faster and you are gone
Again I am alone
Waiting on the other side of the mirror
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restless_dreamer on April 22, 2007, 5:50:41 AM
So sad, yet such good poetry, brilliant work indeed!BrokenMoonScar on April 13, 2007, 10:47:56 AM
OMG!!!! *favs!!!* That's awesome *re-looking over description* Sorry. . . I'm no help, I like it too much as it is to tell you otherwise. I don't want to be put under arrest for the act of plagiarism, so . . . . mind if I use this in some pictures?? I promise to say "you" wrote it!!! Not me!!! But this is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please!?!?!?!?!?!?!