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Betrayal

Failure after failure....loss after loss...what happens when your creator finally gives up on you? He kills you with another, more powerful...better version of yourself.

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Chapter 1 - My downfall
Submitted: August 29, 2007 • Updated: August 29, 2007
Word count: 395 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 183

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DemonZeroX3000 on November 4, 2008, 4:46:51 PM

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DemonZeroX3000I know this sounds stupid...but is this story about Metal Sonic?

plushiegang4 on August 30, 2007, 12:18:16 PM

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plushiegang4Lucifer:MUHAHAHA!!!i shall take over the pancake kingdom!wait?what the hell!?pancakes have stollen my lunch!omg!....>.> <.<.....F*CK!*more rambling is heard from a crazy digimon*

JustaMetalSonicFan1 on August 30, 2007, 1:21:39 PM

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JustaMetalSonicFan1Wizardmon: *poking the bodies in the background*
 
Neve: Ooh, lookit, I'm a prwettyful ballerina!
 
*people in the white coats come and take Lucifer away*
 
Lucifer: Get offa' me!

plushiegang4 on August 30, 2007, 12:16:15 PM

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plushiegang4*laughs*..omg...thats weeeiiird..*laughs again*

plushiegang4 on August 30, 2007, 6:55:24 AM

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plushiegang4-shifty eyes as well- HOW weird?

JustaMetalSonicFan1 on August 30, 2007, 11:12:41 AM

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JustaMetalSonicFan1Well...Sparks and Metal had kidnapped me and took me into the Digital World...and I got to meet Lucifer, Wizardmon and Neve...and then I ended up killing Sparks and Metal...then Lucifer went insane, rambling on about pancakes, Wizardmon was just poking the bodies of the hedgies and Neve was...dancing like a ballerina. O.O;;;?

plushiegang4 on August 29, 2007, 9:45:28 PM

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plushiegang4nuuu!Soda is good for you!keep drinking soda and maybe you'll have a dream about being an orphan yourself...>.>....
~
or you'll meet Lucifer and Wizardmon....eh, youll never know.

JustaMetalSonicFan1 on August 29, 2007, 11:08:38 PM

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JustaMetalSonicFan1I've done the part about meeting Lucifer and Wizardmon....-shifts eyes- It was definately weird...

plushiegang4 on August 29, 2007, 12:04:01 PM

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plushiegang4damn you have some weird dreams girl....

JustaMetalSonicFan1 on August 29, 2007, 1:02:11 PM

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JustaMetalSonicFan1Yes...yes I know...>.<; I need to lay off the soda before bed..