Chapter 1 - the pizza mix thing
Submitted June 12, 2007 Updated June 12, 2007 Status Incomplete | this is a request from falconlobo
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Chapter 1 - the pizza mix thing
Chapter 1 - the pizza mix thing
speedy;hey pass the anchovies
poleiester;your not gonna eat it again are you
speedy um.....no its for the pizza
polieester;speedy
anchovie;hey so whats for dinner
speedy and poliester;...........
anchovie what
two cats walk by
anchovie runs over
anchovie;hello
they all get mad and start fighting
turtles shell falls off
poliester;lussile ordered a pepperoni pizza with anchovies
anchovie takes bucket
anchovie;i better take this one
speedy;hey i had that
anchovie;not anymore
poliester;can you belive them grrr
bad bird;ha ha um what was i laughing at again
speedy;give me the bucket
anchovie;no
speedy runs up and takes the bucket
anchovie;hey
luise;oh your here thank you
anchovie takes the bucket
luise;oh you thank you
anchovie well its my pleshare to do this plus i got a flower
luise;oh thanks
anchovie sings a stupid poem
speedy shows up under him
speedy;hey whats the big idea
anchovie stop it im trying to make a livin
speedy;grrrr
poleiester;your not gonna eat it again are you
speedy um.....no its for the pizza
polieester;speedy
anchovie;hey so whats for dinner
speedy and poliester;...........
anchovie what
two cats walk by
anchovie runs over
anchovie;hello
they all get mad and start fighting
turtles shell falls off
poliester;lussile ordered a pepperoni pizza with anchovies
anchovie takes bucket
anchovie;i better take this one
speedy;hey i had that
anchovie;not anymore
poliester;can you belive them grrr
bad bird;ha ha um what was i laughing at again
speedy;give me the bucket
anchovie;no
speedy runs up and takes the bucket
anchovie;hey
luise;oh your here thank you
anchovie takes the bucket
luise;oh you thank you
anchovie well its my pleshare to do this plus i got a flower
luise;oh thanks
anchovie sings a stupid poem
speedy shows up under him
speedy;hey whats the big idea
anchovie stop it im trying to make a livin
speedy;grrrr
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Falconlobo on June 14, 2007, 8:31:33 AM
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it looks a bit better^^Falconlobo on June 12, 2007, 12:29:41 PM
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also q " " inbeween when a characters speaksand ? ! > depending how you end a sentence^^
Falconlobo on June 12, 2007, 6:53:44 AM
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cute but needs work on Spacing first offand the names It's Lucile not sure of spelling like lucy^^
and Anchovies's first name is Guido^^
and it's funny so that's good but Polly Esther is two words
so it could just be Polly cuse that's her first name^^
otehrwise it's good
and if you want to contiuie it it could have the villans somehow^^
if you need help with the spellings i could look them up for you
and Lucile is the one Speedy and Guido fawn over
Francine is their boss^^