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samuri pizza cats

this is a request from falconlobo



Chapter 1 - the pizza mix thing
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 170 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 269


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Falconlobo on June 14, 2007, 8:31:33 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconloboit looks a bit better^^

Falconlobo on June 12, 2007, 12:29:41 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconloboalso q " " inbeween when a characters speaks

and ? ! > depending how you end a sentence^^

Falconlobo on June 12, 2007, 6:53:44 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconlobocute but needs work on Spacing first off

and the names It's Lucile not sure of spelling like lucy^^

and Anchovies's first name is Guido^^

and it's funny so that's good but Polly Esther is two words

so it could just be Polly cuse that's her first name^^

otehrwise it's good

and if you want to contiuie it it could have the villans somehow^^

if you need help with the spellings i could look them up for you

and Lucile is the one Speedy and Guido fawn over

Francine is their boss^^