samuri pizza cats
Submitted June 12, 2007 Updated June 12, 2007 Status Incomplete | this is a request from falconlobo
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Chapter 1 - the pizza mix thing
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
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Falconlobo on June 14, 2007, 8:31:33 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
it looks a bit better^^Falconlobo on June 12, 2007, 12:29:41 PM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
also q " " inbeween when a characters speaksand ? ! > depending how you end a sentence^^
Falconlobo on June 12, 2007, 6:53:44 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
cute but needs work on Spacing first offand the names It's Lucile not sure of spelling like lucy^^
and Anchovies's first name is Guido^^
and it's funny so that's good but Polly Esther is two words
so it could just be Polly cuse that's her first name^^
otehrwise it's good
and if you want to contiuie it it could have the villans somehow^^
if you need help with the spellings i could look them up for you
and Lucile is the one Speedy and Guido fawn over
Francine is their boss^^