Chapter 11 - Decisions Of A Ninja
Submitted December 17, 2006 Updated March 1, 2007 Status Incomplete | Its about my character Kinoshi Yamiyo. a Ninja from the hidden flower village.
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Chapter 11 - Decisions Of A Ninja
Chapter 11 - Decisions Of A Ninja
Later that night Kinoshi was tossing and turning in her sleep, sweating a panting then holding on to her right arm.
(*Kinoshi's Dream*)
*Kinoshi was running threw a bunch of mist crying and screaming*
Kinoshi;Mother!! Father!! Im sorry I ran away please don't die!!!!
*then Kinoshi stopped running only to see her parents getting slaughtered by Orochimaru's blade*
Kinoshi;NNNNOOOOO!*cries* Stop it STOP IT!!!!
*After that Kinoshi saw a baby crying*
*Then Kinoshi crawls over to the baby and holds her*
Kinoshi;*cries* Why?...why?....*looks at the baby's necklace*
Baby;*cries*
Kinoshi;Kanashima? That's your name?...*cries*
Orochimaru;*evil laugh* It's your turn little one...
Kinoshi;No! I won't let you kill her!* Gets up and runs with Kanashima in her arms*
Orochimaru;*Stretches his tounge* You can't run away from me Kinoshi..
*Then Kinoshi fell down and the baby flew out of her arms, then Orochimaru caught her*
Kinoshi;*gasp* NOOOOO!!!*cries*
*but Kinoshi couldn't stop him, Orochimaru Killed Kanashima*
Kinoshi;*screams*
Orochimaru;Well look whos last*pulls sword out of his mouth*
*Suddenly Kinoshi started screaming really loud, her birthmark was revealing for the first time(and lets just say it hurt like hell)*
Orochimaru;*Suprised look* So much chakra in just one arm!
Kinoshi;AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Orochimaru;Hmmm this girl could be of use to me.*does hand signs, then neck stretches*
Kinoshi;...!!!
*Suddenly Orochimaru bit her on the neck*
Kinoshi;...
Orochimaru;*goes back to normal* You are mine Kinoshi *smiles but then his expression changes* What?!
Kinoshi;*cries* So..much..pain!
Orochimaru;The curse mark never revealed! What happened?!
Kinoshi;*stops crying* Is the Yamiyo Clan's birthmark more powerful than Orochimaru's curse marks?
*Then Orochimaru faded away*
Kinoshi;*looks at her dead parents*
Kinoshi;You also tried to kill me! Mother,Father..you tried to replace me with this child! I wasn't good enough for you!
*after that everything turned black and Kinoshi Suddenly was in darkness by herself*
Kinoshi;Thats it!...Even if you two are dead, I WILL get my revenge! I swear it!!!
(*Dream ends *)
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*Then Kinoshi wakes up breathing heavily*
Kinoshi;...*gets up and walks to the window*
*then kinoshi thought of what itachi told her when she was in the forest*
(Itachi's Voice);"You will gain control over that birthmark of yours,isn't that what you want?"
Kinoshi;*thinks,ok my decision is final..*
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The next morning naruto went to go Visit Kinoshi at the hospital
Naruto;*opens the door* Her Kinoshi I brought you some ramen from the ramen sho...Huh?!
Kinoshi wasen't anywhere in sight and the nurse said that she never saw kinoshi leave her room that morning.
Naruto;Kinoshi!!!!
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we come to Kinoshi running threw trees in a large forest far away from Konoha Village
Kinoshi;*Stops and looks behind her*
*then kinoshi continued running *
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Kinoshi's last words before she left Konoha..
~Im sorry comrades..but these are The Decisions Of A Ninja~
The End...
(Hello writer talking here! Don't get so down yet still mor to come in the ceqal!http://www.fanart-central.net/story-43818.html)
(*Kinoshi's Dream*)
*Kinoshi was running threw a bunch of mist crying and screaming*
Kinoshi;Mother!! Father!! Im sorry I ran away please don't die!!!!
*then Kinoshi stopped running only to see her parents getting slaughtered by Orochimaru's blade*
Kinoshi;NNNNOOOOO!*cries* Stop it STOP IT!!!!
*After that Kinoshi saw a baby crying*
*Then Kinoshi crawls over to the baby and holds her*
Kinoshi;*cries* Why?...why?....*looks at the baby's necklace*
Baby;*cries*
Kinoshi;Kanashima? That's your name?...*cries*
Orochimaru;*evil laugh* It's your turn little one...
Kinoshi;No! I won't let you kill her!* Gets up and runs with Kanashima in her arms*
Orochimaru;*Stretches his tounge* You can't run away from me Kinoshi..
*Then Kinoshi fell down and the baby flew out of her arms, then Orochimaru caught her*
Kinoshi;*gasp* NOOOOO!!!*cries*
*but Kinoshi couldn't stop him, Orochimaru Killed Kanashima*
Kinoshi;*screams*
Orochimaru;Well look whos last*pulls sword out of his mouth*
*Suddenly Kinoshi started screaming really loud, her birthmark was revealing for the first time(and lets just say it hurt like hell)*
Orochimaru;*Suprised look* So much chakra in just one arm!
Kinoshi;AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Orochimaru;Hmmm this girl could be of use to me.*does hand signs, then neck stretches*
Kinoshi;...!!!
*Suddenly Orochimaru bit her on the neck*
Kinoshi;...
Orochimaru;*goes back to normal* You are mine Kinoshi *smiles but then his expression changes* What?!
Kinoshi;*cries* So..much..pain!
Orochimaru;The curse mark never revealed! What happened?!
Kinoshi;*stops crying* Is the Yamiyo Clan's birthmark more powerful than Orochimaru's curse marks?
*Then Orochimaru faded away*
Kinoshi;*looks at her dead parents*
Kinoshi;You also tried to kill me! Mother,Father..you tried to replace me with this child! I wasn't good enough for you!
*after that everything turned black and Kinoshi Suddenly was in darkness by herself*
Kinoshi;Thats it!...Even if you two are dead, I WILL get my revenge! I swear it!!!
(*Dream ends *)
____________________________________________
*Then Kinoshi wakes up breathing heavily*
Kinoshi;...*gets up and walks to the window*
*then kinoshi thought of what itachi told her when she was in the forest*
(Itachi's Voice);"You will gain control over that birthmark of yours,isn't that what you want?"
Kinoshi;*thinks,ok my decision is final..*
____________________________________________
The next morning naruto went to go Visit Kinoshi at the hospital
Naruto;*opens the door* Her Kinoshi I brought you some ramen from the ramen sho...Huh?!
Kinoshi wasen't anywhere in sight and the nurse said that she never saw kinoshi leave her room that morning.
Naruto;Kinoshi!!!!
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we come to Kinoshi running threw trees in a large forest far away from Konoha Village
Kinoshi;*Stops and looks behind her*
*then kinoshi continued running *
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Kinoshi's last words before she left Konoha..
~Im sorry comrades..but these are The Decisions Of A Ninja~
The End...
(Hello writer talking here! Don't get so down yet still mor to come in the ceqal!http://www.fanart-central.net/story-43818.html)
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AlleyCat17 on March 2, 2007, 5:20:22 AM
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wow good story.