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Thinking of You

This is my first story being wrote in a long time...I finished it 5:12pm...July 01, 04. It's for Fruits Basket. It's told through someone's point of veiw. I have a unique way of writing. >_>;; So you can kind of pick. It's told through either Yuki or

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Chapter 1 - Thinking of You
Submitted: July 1, 2004 • Updated: July 1, 2004
Word count: 1497 • Size: 7k • Comments: 6 • views: 179

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MandyLovsDaPeoples on July 19, 2006, 1:55:50 AM

MandyLovsDaPeoples on (Chapter: 1)
MandyLovsDaPeoplesMORE MORE MORE!!!!!
please more
i really liked it
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

Riku-kitty on June 6, 2005, 3:50:16 PM

Riku-kitty on (Chapter: 1)
Riku-kittyMORE MORE MORE! And I got confused....maybe you could switch points of veiw like from kyo to yuki....would work JAH!

TheArchitect on January 8, 2005, 7:47:57 PM

TheArchitect on (Chapter: 1)
TheArchitectLove it!!!! pls write MORE!!!!

BloodRoses1619 on August 17, 2004, 11:04:19 PM

BloodRoses1619 on (Chapter: 1)
BloodRoses1619that was very good ^^ and i personally thought it of Kyo, cause some stuff didn't sound too Yuki-ish...example..."You're still looking at me. That questionable look in your eyes from me yelling at you". Yuki never yells at Kyo like that. only kyo does, cause well, hes kyo. but thats my opinion ^^;;

Anime-Chick on August 15, 2004, 4:37:54 AM

Anime-Chick on (Chapter: 1)
Anime-ChickI LOOOVVEE IITTT!!
but uuhmm..who's who??does yuki love kyou or kyou loves yuki?? whatever..i love the way you wrote it..it's almost like a poem..i really loved it..could you make another chappie where yuki and kyou come together finally?? ^^
BECAUSE I WANT YOU TO!! BECAUSE I LOVE THIS STORY!! BECAUSE..BECAUSE..! JUST BECAUSE!!!!!!!
bye ^^

MusicBitch on July 3, 2004, 1:37:49 PM

MusicBitch on (Chapter: 1)
MusicBitchI like it ^__^ good job. ppl tell me i am a good writer but i am not to sure bout that -_-;;; even though i am trying to get my first story (origanal story) done so maybe it will be published ^__^ ne ways nice very nice. Keep on writing i am sure you will get better and better ne ways good job