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magnolia dreams

this is a story about two friends trying to make a decent liveing and thier fealings for one another.



Chapter 1 - finding a job
Submitted: May 12, 2005 • Updated: May 12, 2005
Word count: 1276 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 168


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redbeefandwine on June 2, 2005, 5:21:04 AM

redbeefandwine on (Chapter: 1)
redbeefandwineawesome! i like the way you described the charecters. not too detailed so you can kinda get your own impression of what they look like. i think that makes them more apealing. anyway, cant wait for the next chapter. great work!

higes_wolf on May 16, 2005, 11:46:17 AM

higes_wolf on (Chapter: 1)
higes_wolfAh!great story!!!!
i do agree there are a few spelling errors but that's fine.^^
great job Kyou!
ur an amazing writer.
can't wait to read more!