Chapter 1 - stop
Submitted April 2, 2004 Updated April 2, 2004 Status Incomplete | I wrote this when I wasnt sure what was going on inside my head. Inspierd by a IM message from demonic angel.
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Chapter 1 - stop
Chapter 1 - stop
Why wont they stop?
There are so many of them
Trying to tell me different things at once
Why wont they leave me alone?
The’re ringing bells inside my ears
Trying to make sure I listen to them
But I can’t listen, I don’t know why
It’s just insane
People with individual personalities spring into my mind
Trying to tell me what is right
No one can help me
No one understands
They’re all as frustrated as me
Screaming to get my attention
But they wont listen to me
They’re tearing me apart
As my mind wanders more voices are created
Trying to manipulate my own voice
Trying to change it into something its not
Why is this happening to me?
I feel as if I’m fighting a losing war
But I’m not going to give up
Ill fight it to the bitter end
To get my identity back
My being
There are so many of them
Trying to tell me different things at once
Why wont they leave me alone?
The’re ringing bells inside my ears
Trying to make sure I listen to them
But I can’t listen, I don’t know why
It’s just insane
People with individual personalities spring into my mind
Trying to tell me what is right
No one can help me
No one understands
They’re all as frustrated as me
Screaming to get my attention
But they wont listen to me
They’re tearing me apart
As my mind wanders more voices are created
Trying to manipulate my own voice
Trying to change it into something its not
Why is this happening to me?
I feel as if I’m fighting a losing war
But I’m not going to give up
Ill fight it to the bitter end
To get my identity back
My being
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Slippingthroughreality on April 5, 2004, 2:15:07 AM
This poem is really poweful and it has a voice of its own and speaks the emotion of it. This is a really great poem.LJmouse on April 3, 2004, 11:03:40 PM
LJmouse on
thank you ^_^