Chapter 2 - Proposal? 'The' Story'

(Yes! Chappie 2!) Zaiden and Xaiden walked through the park with Zaidens Girlfriend that afternoon as the two brothers had almost scared

looks on their faces. This had been going on the whole day as Zaidens girlfriend looked over at them and asked a bit worried "You ok?" Zaiden

said "J-just fine......*gulp* Im g-great......" She sat him down and his little brother as they all sat under a shadey tree. She asked "Listen, dont think

too hard about it. You were right, its too early to think about that....." He interrupted her finally gaining confidence back "No, YOU were right." She

blushed lightly saying "What do you mean?" He said "Wait 'till tonight you'll see what I mean. Stay here, I'll be in town, most likely in the mall." She

blushed very dark as she knew what he ment. She hugged his little brother tight as Zaiden headed into town, to the jewelery shop. He saw the

LAST diamond ring. There was a girl at th counter. He squinted to see her name. "Bunz is it?" A cream coloured rabbit turned around saying "May

I help you?" He said "Yeah! I needthat diamond ring for a special occasion!" Bunz smiled taking out the ring saying "First date?" Zaiden shook

his head saying "Nope, marriage" She put her hand over her mouth saying "Then you get a 40% dis count!" He smiled saying "Thanks I dont

have much......" She rang the price up saying "Okay.......thts 180$ please ^^" His eyes widened as he only had 90$. He hung his head as he

slammed his fist on the counter walking away. Bunz felt his pain........pain of loss........(ANOTHER FANFICIE!) so she yelled after him "WAIT!" HE

turned around asking "What now?..........." She said "........I know I shouldnt do this..........but...........here" She handed him the ring" Bunz smiled

saying "Good luck ^^;;" He smiled as he took her hand saying "Come with me! You wont want to miss this." She followed him smiling as he

heard a crying from the distance. He headed to the end of a cliff as he saw them hanging from a clif. His brother and girlfriend. He grabbed both

their hands as Bunz grabbed his legs. Zaiden said "Hold on! Bunz! Call 911!!!" Bunz said "MY cell phone is in my back pocket! ILL DROP YOU!"

Zaiden clenched his teeth as his girlfriend said "Zaiden.........." it caught his attention. "Let go............" She said to him with the trusting look of a

married couple. He said "NO! Just wait!" She said "No.........Please..........save your brother........for me......" He looked away biting his lower lip.

That last tender feeling of her hand on his, the flower delicate, feather soft, smooth and sensitive........never again......He let go of her as she let

go of him, falling into the darkness of the abyss still smiling at him.......still smiling.......He looked away......his tears carrying down to the abyss,

followed by a thump and one last cry........."zaiden.........." It carried into the wind.......out to the distance to be echoed forever through the

universe.........throughout.........his heart. He pulled his brother up as he hugged Bunz by reaction. She hugged him back as they stayed this way

for a few days.......staying together. They thought of themselves as a couple. But at the funeral. Horrible news. Zaiden stayed after as he stand in

front of his girlfriends grave. He knew of her now.........she loved him. Had his pictures in her room. He stayed after until it rained.......he dropped

the diamond ring into the muddy water letting it sink into the coffin with her body. And just by chance it landed on her ring finger. She smiled in

his deceased body, and her coffin as the wind whispered. "I love you.......forever and ever......." (This one had me crying............*sniff*)

 

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