Chapter 1 - Kill Meh
Submitted June 28, 2005 Updated June 28, 2005 Status Incomplete | A consept I'ce been wanting to get down in some artistic way for along time now. The ending's alittle wierd. Binder said it'd be okay to post poetry, so blame her.
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Chapter 1 - Kill Meh
Chapter 1 - Kill Meh
Kill me for a day,
And let me fade away.
Let me watch from the side,
See if anybody cried.
Show me if they find the body.
Then leave to see who's been naughty.
I could answer, "Whould they care?"
By making a temporary tear.
Peer at those who came before.
See the numbers who shared remorse.
Tell if those who I adore,
Really thought I was something more.
But then bring me back again,
So I can live and pretend
That I don't know how you'd react,
If you knew I wasn't comign back.
And let me fade away.
Let me watch from the side,
See if anybody cried.
Show me if they find the body.
Then leave to see who's been naughty.
I could answer, "Whould they care?"
By making a temporary tear.
Peer at those who came before.
See the numbers who shared remorse.
Tell if those who I adore,
Really thought I was something more.
But then bring me back again,
So I can live and pretend
That I don't know how you'd react,
If you knew I wasn't comign back.
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Whatsername on November 22, 2005, 9:27:32 PM
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woh, kule!Ichidou_Daisuke on November 21, 2005, 12:26:05 AM
This poem is really awesome. You made it flow, but kept its main purpose/story. ^^