Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted June 27, 2004 Updated June 27, 2004 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Lovesong.
Speaking of such.
That some know well.
That some know TOO well.
It's nice.
To follow the rhythm.
Lost in melodies.
Long forgotten.
Exposed by a distressed wind.
Otherwise known.
As pain.
A soft heartache.
Light,
Crushing pressure.
Maybe not so bad.
Small rivulets of blood.
Crimson hues.
Long washed away.
By indifference.
But the only intent.
A song ever had.
Was to make you feel something.
This time.
Happiness.
Joy to be in love.
It was all innocence.
The song never meant.
To see.
Salt rubbed.
Into the wounds.
~ This came from a strange dream. ~
Speaking of such.
That some know well.
That some know TOO well.
It's nice.
To follow the rhythm.
Lost in melodies.
Long forgotten.
Exposed by a distressed wind.
Otherwise known.
As pain.
A soft heartache.
Light,
Crushing pressure.
Maybe not so bad.
Small rivulets of blood.
Crimson hues.
Long washed away.
By indifference.
But the only intent.
A song ever had.
Was to make you feel something.
This time.
Happiness.
Joy to be in love.
It was all innocence.
The song never meant.
To see.
Salt rubbed.
Into the wounds.
~ This came from a strange dream. ~
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L7 on June 15, 2005, 7:50:44 AM
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I like it. Very descriptive. I can feel a headache coming on...Magical_Stan on July 2, 2004, 3:09:02 AM
Magical_Stan on
KKKKKCCCCCCHHHHHSSSSSTT! I not goth, just me.senkoneko on June 28, 2004, 11:54:24 AM
senkoneko on
Good job pretty joyful,That was one of your dreams?
Woah, my dreams are blank loading screens.
Or sometimes about cats and jin and me having a fun day.
I don't think me will eva be a goth
Ban_Boredom on June 28, 2004, 7:36:22 AM
Ban_Boredom on
wow this is so good.... excellent vocabulary O_O