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Chapter 1 - Divorce

My friend's parents are getting divorced and I felt so bad and this poem came to my mind and I quickly wrote it down.

Chapter 1 - Divorce

Chapter 1 - Divorce


You feel pain

This moment always makes you cry

You just can't help these feelings inside

~*~*~

Is it your fault?

Did you cause all the hate?

Of course it is not,

But it is far too late

~*~*~

It's happened before

Nothing really new

Not anymore does it happen to few

But of course fate has taken the dark side with you

~*~*~

You feel fragile inside

But on the outside you play tough

You yell and scream that this is enough

~*~*~

What will happen?

How can it be?

So much love

It was once the key

~*~*~

Now it drifts

Leaving you far behind

So you can break free

And learn to just cry-

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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Ichidou_Daisuke on March 24, 2006, 7:17:55 PM

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Ichidou_DaisukeReally nice. At first, I thought it was gonna be another cliche, emo poem, but you pulled it off nicely. Although a rather horrid subject, the writing style made it flow nicely- somewhat cute.

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on November 26, 2004, 12:50:25 AM

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Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnySuch a sad poem.... Plz give your friend my sincerest sympathy...