Chapter 1 - Divorce
Submitted November 25, 2004 Updated November 25, 2004 Status Incomplete | My friend's parents are getting divorced and I felt so bad and this poem came to my mind and I quickly wrote it down.
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Chapter 1 - Divorce
Chapter 1 - Divorce
You feel pain
This moment always makes you cry
You just can't help these feelings inside
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Is it your fault?
Did you cause all the hate?
Of course it is not,
But it is far too late
~*~*~
It's happened before
Nothing really new
Not anymore does it happen to few
But of course fate has taken the dark side with you
~*~*~
You feel fragile inside
But on the outside you play tough
You yell and scream that this is enough
~*~*~
What will happen?
How can it be?
So much love
It was once the key
~*~*~
Now it drifts
Leaving you far behind
So you can break free
And learn to just cry-
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Ichidou_Daisuke on March 24, 2006, 7:17:55 PM
Really nice. At first, I thought it was gonna be another cliche, emo poem, but you pulled it off nicely. Although a rather horrid subject, the writing style made it flow nicely- somewhat cute.