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Chapter 2 - Flickering lust

a poem of Raven - dedicated to starfire... shoujo ai

Chapter 2 - Flickering lust

Chapter 2 - Flickering lust


Flickering lust

Like a candle in the dark

Crawlings in my shoulder

You gave them to me in your passion



Today I'm sitting

In the darkest place

Inside my loneliness

Try to bring you a poem from my heart



It's such a warming feeling

But I'm getting cold

I want to light the candle

The place we used to share our love



My fear of losing you

cuts me like sharpest knives

Raven's feathers showed me

The way to you



The Bridge to you is crumbling

You cried in front of me

Isn't it ironic?

I felt your fear lightyears ago



The letters written with my blood

Bitten my wrist

With tear-filled eyes

It hurts to see you cry



Would you ever understand

That I have feelings too?

Emotions are too dangerous

But I won't hide them anymore



I'm like an animal…

I will find you, wherever you might be

I will dry your tears

And love you till you die



Moan, my sweetest star

Brighter than Pleiades

I want to feel your fire

Want to kiss your burning skin



I want to touch you

Melt with you to one

I want to bite and scratch you

And kiss your pain away



But now there's just me

And my sacred solitude

Caged in memories and tears

I never cried - but now I do…






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Lord_B on February 17, 2006, 1:19:54 AM

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Lord_BYeah, both these poems are really successful. Notice how he uses opposites to convey a deeper meaning, mentioning being the moon while Starfire is the sun; being the fall while she is the spring, and in this one mentions being cold after feeling something warm.

Quite an interesting style, Marvel. Hope to read more poems from you henceforth.

Wobbly_Headed_Bob on January 21, 2006, 4:29:15 AM

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Wobbly_Headed_BobHoly crap! How do you come up with this stuff! It's awesome!

TerraShallDie on October 29, 2005, 2:28:56 AM

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TerraShallDieGoddamnit, Mar, you're sooooo much better than me at EVERYTHING! XDD
Jk. I'm not THAT hopeless. But you are better in most things. I can't write. XP