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Raven's Poem

a poem of Raven - dedicated to starfire... shoujo ai

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Raven's Poem
Submitted: October 10, 2005 • Updated: October 10, 2005
Word count: 114 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 205

Chapter 2 - Flickering lust
Submitted: October 26, 2005 • Updated: October 26, 2005
Word count: 235 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 208

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Lord_B on February 17, 2006, 1:19:54 AM

Lord_B on (Chapter: 2)
Lord_BYeah, both these poems are really successful. Notice how he uses opposites to convey a deeper meaning, mentioning being the moon while Starfire is the sun; being the fall while she is the spring, and in this one mentions being cold after feeling something warm.

Quite an interesting style, Marvel. Hope to read more poems from you henceforth.

Wobbly_Headed_Bob on January 21, 2006, 4:29:15 AM

Wobbly_Headed_Bob on (Chapter: 2)
Wobbly_Headed_BobHoly crap! How do you come up with this stuff! It's awesome!

Wobbly_Headed_Bob on January 21, 2006, 4:27:13 AM

Wobbly_Headed_Bob on (Chapter: 1)
Wobbly_Headed_BobIt's beautiful. But I don't really get what it means. But I still love it.

TerraShallDie on October 29, 2005, 2:28:56 AM

TerraShallDie on (Chapter: 2)
TerraShallDieGoddamnit, Mar, you're sooooo much better than me at EVERYTHING! XDD
Jk. I'm not THAT hopeless. But you are better in most things. I can't write. XP

I-DONT-GET-MUCH on October 24, 2005, 2:12:46 AM

I-DONT-GET-MUCH on (Chapter: 1)
I-DONT-GET-MUCHWow this is really good *faves* ^_~

TerraShallDie on October 15, 2005, 10:48:40 PM

TerraShallDie on (Chapter: 1)
TerraShallDieO.O
...if I could write like that...ugh. Damnit. *bangs head on desk*
O.o K...uhuhmhmhmmmmm...when my noggin heals, I'll add to favs...