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The Mysterious One

this is a story about a "mysterious" person that no one could find. they saw their shadow but never saw their face. a 10 year old girl name Raja is called into action to save the person and bring them into the life of others.

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Chapter 1 - The Mysterious One Speaks
Submitted: April 4, 2006 • Updated: April 4, 2006
Word count: 494 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 303

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Flyinmonkey1010 on April 8, 2006, 4:15:57 PM

Flyinmonkey1010 on (Chapter: 1)
Flyinmonkey1010Hey, I've read ur story! I think it's pretty KEWL so far! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
@(*..*)@ TIS A MONKEY!!!!

bluefairy421 on April 5, 2006, 8:42:29 AM

bluefairy421 on (Chapter: 1)
bluefairy421That's a very nice beginning! My only changes would be that "incase" should be "in case" and you are missing quotes at the end of the letter (since you started with them). This sounds great though!

Blue Fairy