Chapter 1 - Broken
Submitted June 8, 2004 Updated June 8, 2004 Status Incomplete | A short poem I wrote the night that I broke up with my boyfriend..It's a few months old, but I still like it. :)
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Chapter 1 - Broken
Chapter 1 - Broken
I stare at you with watery eyes
Wishing to know the truth, not the lies
Your expression is tense
And you bluntly tell me I don't make sense
You slowly walk away
Never to see me another day
I collapse to the floor, motionless
My features showing of a heart-broken emotion
The wind whistles through the gallows
While I sit there
Feeling empty, feeling shallow
I lose all thoughts
I feel pain in my heart, like being shot
Love is a fantasy
An interference with destiny
It's just a fiction
But why is it such a great addiction?
If it is real, where does it come from?
And please, tell me, where can I find some?
I've searched the tides
Low and high
I've wandered the lands
Desiring to see it at hand
Love..
Is it really there..?
Do you have any to spare?
Wishing to know the truth, not the lies
Your expression is tense
And you bluntly tell me I don't make sense
You slowly walk away
Never to see me another day
I collapse to the floor, motionless
My features showing of a heart-broken emotion
The wind whistles through the gallows
While I sit there
Feeling empty, feeling shallow
I lose all thoughts
I feel pain in my heart, like being shot
Love is a fantasy
An interference with destiny
It's just a fiction
But why is it such a great addiction?
If it is real, where does it come from?
And please, tell me, where can I find some?
I've searched the tides
Low and high
I've wandered the lands
Desiring to see it at hand
Love..
Is it really there..?
Do you have any to spare?
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BringerOfSilence on August 11, 2005, 10:55:07 AM
TifaBakura on September 23, 2004, 6:02:43 PM
TifaBakura on
*Crys* Wahhhh so touching *sniff* Ace work! Love it!akyofan on August 8, 2004, 3:07:53 AM
akyofan on
this is fantastic, ur an amazing poet, keep up the great work!Maroon005 on July 5, 2004, 4:02:36 AM
Maroon005 on
omg this is so touching and beautiful! what makes it so great is that u expressed ur emotions in it..something that i can never achieve. great poem anyhow^^tiler_james on June 19, 2004, 2:29:29 AM
tiler_james on
awesome. love it. ^_^
-Nekome