Chapter 1 - Lonely
Submitted April 5, 2004 Updated April 5, 2004 Status Incomplete | My second poem i hope you like it
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Chapter 1 - Lonely
Chapter 1 - Lonely
Theres lonely people in this world,
It would suck to be lonely,
But sometimes I do feel lonely,
You feel really empty,
That you dont deserve to live,
You just need someone to talk to,
But theres no one there,
Where do you turn,
Where do you go,
You dont know,
Some have no friends,
Some feel loney because they dont have a b/f,
Its very commen in this world,
why can't we all just get along?!,
I mean some people make people feel that they dont belong in this world,
It's alot of people's faults,
They end up havin them kill their selfs,
Thats not being a good citizen,
Lets all do a good thing for our lovely coutry,
and just get along so people dont feel loney!,
And kill their self's............
It would suck to be lonely,
But sometimes I do feel lonely,
You feel really empty,
That you dont deserve to live,
You just need someone to talk to,
But theres no one there,
Where do you turn,
Where do you go,
You dont know,
Some have no friends,
Some feel loney because they dont have a b/f,
Its very commen in this world,
why can't we all just get along?!,
I mean some people make people feel that they dont belong in this world,
It's alot of people's faults,
They end up havin them kill their selfs,
Thats not being a good citizen,
Lets all do a good thing for our lovely coutry,
and just get along so people dont feel loney!,
And kill their self's............
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SilverFox13425 on April 19, 2004, 10:52:35 AM
hmmmm......AWESOME JOBIE!!!!!!!!!!! So deep and tells exactly how u feel ^~