Chapter 1 - Loneliness
Submitted September 11, 2004 Updated September 11, 2004 Status Incomplete | this was just a poem I thought up in math class
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Chapter 1 - Loneliness
Chapter 1 - Loneliness
Loneliness comes with sadness
Solitude roams through darkness
The unhappiness of being alone can even lead to madness
Caring weather you are loved is an important thing
Loving someone even through misery
Makes that one person want to dance and sing
Being ignored and feeling down makes the whole day a drag
Sometimes thinking about things can help make better sense
Loneliness comes when you think your all that and brag
Don’t make fun of what you don’t understand or know
Because everyone has feelings and a heart
Like a present is wrapped with paper and a bow
It can turn the world upside down
Like a fish out of water and a bird not flown
And a smile turned to a frown
These feelings may come and go
But they will always remain in the back of your mind
As the feelings you want no one to ever know
Written By: Danielle Dyer
Solitude roams through darkness
The unhappiness of being alone can even lead to madness
Caring weather you are loved is an important thing
Loving someone even through misery
Makes that one person want to dance and sing
Being ignored and feeling down makes the whole day a drag
Sometimes thinking about things can help make better sense
Loneliness comes when you think your all that and brag
Don’t make fun of what you don’t understand or know
Because everyone has feelings and a heart
Like a present is wrapped with paper and a bow
It can turn the world upside down
Like a fish out of water and a bird not flown
And a smile turned to a frown
These feelings may come and go
But they will always remain in the back of your mind
As the feelings you want no one to ever know
Written By: Danielle Dyer
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sofiadivine on September 11, 2004, 5:32:00 PM
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Sadly but truely, love is combined with loneliness. Loneliness sometimes lead people to do the unthinkable. It leads to someone accepting a date so that they are no longer alone. I leads to mysery and pitty dates. nobody wants that and people need to see how the partner feels. HOwever, I state clearly that the poem is very good, and it passes a message that should hopefully change some peoples' lives. But htank you for making me realize that I mostlikely made a mistake.