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Chapter 3 - Wind

these are my element poems. It took me almost a year to come up with them all. Tell me what you think and if my time was well spent, your comments will be appreciated.

Chapter 3 - Wind

Chapter 3 - Wind


The Elements:

Wind

Quick and strong

Wind does come.

She comes to soothe us on dry, hot days.

She helps Water put out

Fire's flames on his prey.

She moves with such great agility

She can never be seen.

No matter how hard you try.

She can make trees bend to her will with her great strength

in any direction of her choosing.

She always tries to be a hero,

something she is not.

For she forgets her limits of her power

and will run so fast

she will unknowingly create tornadoes and

hurricanes.

For this she is sorry.

She wants to ask for us to forgive her,

but she cannot.

Because if she stops running,

she will cease to exist, she will die.

Her stronger friend, the

one that never bows

is the almighty planet Earth.


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mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:32:17 AM

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mystic_rat_theifGADZOOKS! (in a good way, that is)

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:20:13 AM

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AnimanicThe wind that never knows its mistakes till its to late, she also addes fire unowlingly when he is a wildfire. Good as usual. one more to go!

NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:42:23 AM

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NegaDarkStarXManga, your silly, lol. I like this one too ^_^!!

manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:43:45 AM

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manga_cat_girlWind: Oh no! I cant stop! "sees tree in front of her" Aaaah! Oh, I forgot that I cant die by hitting something!