fire

Chapter 1 - Fire
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 137 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 167

Chapter 2 - Water
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 113 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 140

Chapter 3 - Wind
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 162 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 149

Chapter 4 - Earth
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 143 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 169

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Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 11:43:41 AM

Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 11:43:41 AM (Chapter: 2)

whoa,that's deep, I like your poems! I'm working on a story right now, maybe you can read it, but it's yaoi, you don't have to read it if you don't want to. again, great poems!
~chemical-sweet~

Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 11:37:54 AM

Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 11:37:54 AM (Chapter: 1)

WOW, that was so poetic...I love it. your a really good poet!
~Chemical-sweet~

Neawolf on January 19, 2006, 5:55:48 AM

Neawolf on January 19, 2006, 5:55:48 AM (Chapter: 1)

YAh! fire is the best of the four elements. Nicely done, your a very good poet

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:34:32 AM

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:34:32 AM (Chapter: 4)

that was a great way to end the series of poems that you have made! i enjoyed it very much!

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:32:17 AM

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:32:17 AM (Chapter: 3)

GADZOOKS! (in a good way, that is)

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:29:16 AM

mystic_rat_theif on November 22, 2005, 9:29:16 AM (Chapter: 2)

omg omg omg! ILOVE IT!

mystic_rat_theif on November 21, 2005, 10:41:13 AM

mystic_rat_theif on November 21, 2005, 10:41:13 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow! THAT WAS SO POETIC! you made a way better poen than my "Bentley"one! great job!

Xx_AviloriA_xX on November 19, 2005, 9:47:28 AM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on November 19, 2005, 9:47:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

fire has it beauty too, like bon fires^^ but its good non the less!

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:25:13 AM

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:25:13 AM (Chapter: 4)

Earth needs anger management. very good.
you be quiet.

*cat* poems are stupid. hey what are you doing. put me down! AAAAAAAA- *hits wall* I hate you

What was that!

nothing...

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:20:13 AM

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:20:13 AM (Chapter: 3)

The wind that never knows its mistakes till its to late, she also addes fire unowlingly when he is a wildfire. Good as usual. one more to go!