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Chapter 1 - Untitled

A song I wrote in a state of depression. There have been many outlooks on this one. My favorite is that the song is about a murderer, called lonliness. But the true meaning is much deeper. I will leave it open to interpretation...

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


Solitude





Verse 1:

Here I am lost in my darkest hour

The empty expressions have left me feeling sour

I tried to run but I couldnt hide

From the misguided honor these words confide

The wicked within has scarred the soul

My world is spinning, I'm out of control



Chorus:

Discard the love you hold within

Open you're heart and welcome the sin

Feel the heat, it's ever so rude

You're soul is trapped in my solitude



Verse 2:

There is no escape from the torment you hold

This isn't a game, you cannot fold

Out of the light to the darkness you crept

You're most held secret will not be kept

This is the end as you feel the pain

Do not be afraid, you are going insane



Chorus X2



Verse 3:

You're covered with wounds that will not heal

Endless pain is all that you feel

Your heart is driven by the darkest of needs

From the sins you commit the evil will feed

As you feel the torture within your heart

The hatred takes over, and tears you apart



With all you've lost the void is filled

There's no turning back the deal was sealed

You're mind has faded, you're soul's enslaved

Now my solitude will be your grave

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Darkmasterbabe on June 14, 2005, 4:31:02 PM

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Darkmasterbabe Hello, Andrew


I love This Song You wrote it looks decent and the lyrics were written quite Good perfect Example of Creativity

*favs*

unloved_poet on March 30, 2005, 1:01:25 PM

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unloved_poetthats pretty damn good!! better than any of the songs if written. their crap -_- *savs to favs*

Morrigan_Vampiress on March 12, 2005, 6:50:16 PM

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Morrigan_Vampiressthis is another brilliant one!!!I think that you should write short stories maybe even novels!!!!!where do you get the ideas from for these coz they are awesome!

sheyla on March 8, 2005, 5:11:06 PM

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sheylaawesome!!! my brother writes songs too (kinda rap), you are really good!! keep it up!
*favs