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Chapter 1 - Raven

A poema all about Raven, the first poem I ever wrote not for school! hope ya like it!

Chapter 1 - Raven

Chapter 1 - Raven


“Raven”

Here's a poem I wrote about Raven, my face TT charrie. I think it's from B.B.'s perspective, but it depends on what couples you support. I don't own Teen Titans or any related characters. Also, it be the first poem I ever wrote that wasn't for school or anything.

Sitting there all by herself, she seems so lonely

She may be dark, but don't you see?

That was her life before she belonged anywhere

Probably because no one gave her a thought, or a care

I don't think people like us could know what it was like for her

I guess we'll never really know for sure

She is always so mysterious

Maybe because her mom was a “Bride of Darkness”*

So if you don't know the story,

You really should listen closely:



Her mother was a human, very much misunderstood

But when she ran away from home the outcome was not good

She had a child, but the father was a demon

On Azarath was born a daughter named Raven

Who lived there without emotions for many years

Lest she let her demon side show, she couldn't smile, frown, or shed any tears

When she was older, she escaped to Earth, where Azarathians had fled from

In joining the Teen Titans, many battles she won

Some battles were against the demon Trigon, her father

But since leaving Azarath, there has been no sign of Arella, her mother



Now in her room she sits meditating, or reading

On the inside, she must feel like she's bleeding!

You could call her “Queen of Darkness”*, if you must

But not true enough is that to make such a fuss

Her demon side makes her dark, but her human side makes her half light, too

Four good, true friends has she, but four is very few*

Although she finally has a place where she belongs

I wonder if someone else, more like her, she longs

Well, of course, after Malchior…

He seemed, for her, to open so many doors.



Malchior was a wizard, trapped in a book, who asked for Raven's help

She tried different spells, and gave him that help

He then taught her bad magick, curses and spells

So that peacefully people would not be able to dwell

She did not know that she was being tricked `till later

`Till finally he was freed completely from the form of paper

Did she find out that he wasn't a wizard, but an evil dragon!

She defeated him, and that was the last she saw of him

He was not the only who was a betrayer

The first one was, of course, Terra.



Raven never trusted Terra from the start

Although when she was first betrayed, it must have hurt her heart

Raven was the last to accept Terra as a member of the team

And they were pretty good friends, or so it would seem

When Terra returned to the side of Slade,

She took Raven out first, so great was the returning hate

They always seemed to be “going at it”

But when Terra was turned to stone, even Raven was somewhat saddened

That was then, this is now, that is that, this is where we stand

In reviving Terra, Raven may lend an important hand.



She may sit all alone in her room

Perhaps lonelily staring at the moon

But she's not alone, no matter what she may think

Because she's got such great friends who will help her with any “kinks”

Although to her it may be hard to link,

No matter what anyone thinks,

She really isn't that bad

It wasn't her fault that a demon was he dad!

But she'll be okay,

At least for today, anyway.







Kkz! Well, hope ya liked it, I personally thought a few lines were a wee bit corny, but hey, the first one I wrote ^^ I was gonna put more up today, but I got a last minute date, so you'll hafta wait a few more days for some more poems!!!

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whisper on June 13, 2006, 3:00:43 AM

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whispergreat work for a first time poem
faves
terra should DIE!!

Crystalmoon1 on April 12, 2006, 2:17:22 AM

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Crystalmoon1WOW!!! this is full of what Raven hasn't:EMOTION!! it's brilliant! good use of difft. parts of tt eps.*FAVES*!!!:]

RavenGothGirl on January 16, 2006, 6:22:11 AM

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RavenGothGirlThank thee! And don't worry, I'll continue some of them...

RaexBB_72sol on December 21, 2005, 8:49:18 AM

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RaexBB_72solGreat poem, I loved it. I have a question. Will you ever finish your other stories you began to write. Please reply on my profile.

RavenGothGirl on December 6, 2005, 4:39:08 AM

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RavenGothGirlI have no idea. I don't think so, cuz Microsoft Word underlined it in red when I typed it, but it totally describes it better than just "lonely", so I don't care. At least I didn't put anything about a "walking buddy" lolz (kinda an inside joke....)

RavenGothGirl on December 3, 2005, 2:54:34 AM

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RavenGothGirland by the way, *is i made this up in Social Studies last year (i drew a pic of a "Vampiress Raven" and used up almost all the ink in my friend Brittany's pen lolz!) and *("four is very few (srry, I ment to put it as "**"))is that that is how many friends I had last year (this year our groups combined, right LK? lolz)