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"Raven"

A poema all about Raven, the first poem I ever wrote not for school! hope ya like it!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Raven
Submitted: December 2, 2005 • Updated: December 2, 2005
Word count: 707 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 303

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whisper on June 13, 2006, 3:00:43 AM

whisper on (Chapter: 1)
whispergreat work for a first time poem
faves
terra should DIE!!

Crystalmoon1 on April 12, 2006, 2:17:22 AM

Crystalmoon1 on (Chapter: 1)
Crystalmoon1WOW!!! this is full of what Raven hasn't:EMOTION!! it's brilliant! good use of difft. parts of tt eps.*FAVES*!!!:]

RavenGothGirl on January 16, 2006, 6:22:11 AM

RavenGothGirl on (Chapter: 1)
RavenGothGirlThank thee! And don't worry, I'll continue some of them...

RaexBB_72sol on December 21, 2005, 8:49:18 AM

RaexBB_72sol on (Chapter: 1)
RaexBB_72solGreat poem, I loved it. I have a question. Will you ever finish your other stories you began to write. Please reply on my profile.

RavenGothGirl on December 6, 2005, 4:39:08 AM

RavenGothGirl on (Chapter: 1)
RavenGothGirlI have no idea. I don't think so, cuz Microsoft Word underlined it in red when I typed it, but it totally describes it better than just "lonely", so I don't care. At least I didn't put anything about a "walking buddy" lolz (kinda an inside joke....)

RavenGothGirl on December 3, 2005, 2:54:34 AM

RavenGothGirl on (Chapter: 1)
RavenGothGirland by the way, *is i made this up in Social Studies last year (i drew a pic of a "Vampiress Raven" and used up almost all the ink in my friend Brittany's pen lolz!) and *("four is very few (srry, I ment to put it as "**"))is that that is how many friends I had last year (this year our groups combined, right LK? lolz)